tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post136670077776559623..comments2023-10-10T10:13:23.885-05:00Comments on Writing in the Bachs: Poetry Potluck - Moods, Feelings and EmotionsOther Maryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-8269754087132252832010-11-17T14:53:54.815-06:002010-11-17T14:53:54.815-06:00Thank you all so much. 700miles I'll check ou...Thank you all so much. 700miles I'll check out yours. :o)Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-61639585892459048692010-11-17T09:45:01.795-06:002010-11-17T09:45:01.795-06:00short and thought provoking. i enjoyed the feelin...short and thought provoking. i enjoyed the feeling of a question in this. great write. <br /><br />take care ~700miles<br /><br />my potlucks:<br />http://wp.me/pU7yT-in<br />http://wp.me/pU7yT-hS<br />http://wp.me/sU7yT-tsunamiAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-42514117076643252412010-11-17T06:06:45.966-06:002010-11-17T06:06:45.966-06:00you just expressed every poet, every writer's ...you just expressed every poet, every writer's experience. Excellent! :))Eaton Bennett aka Berenice Albrechthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15155384243916982826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-81696687578198814932010-11-16T19:52:16.972-06:002010-11-16T19:52:16.972-06:00Claim award via my 3rd entry, #160 on potluck week...Claim award via my 3rd entry, #160 on potluck week 10...<br />way to go.<br />Thanks for the support.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-32133599970412453932010-11-16T11:04:47.276-06:002010-11-16T11:04:47.276-06:00Thank you. I love that phrase; it haunts me.Thank you. I love that phrase; it haunts me.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-1794677403526201662010-11-16T10:49:42.734-06:002010-11-16T10:49:42.734-06:00Dear Mary
Beautiful imagery.. and the way you have...Dear Mary<br />Beautiful imagery.. and the way you have incorporated HD's word is so beautiful.<br />Thanks for sharing..<br /><br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah Shivaya<br />Twitter: @VerseEveryDay<br />Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.comShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-4450088787174977242010-11-16T08:46:19.857-06:002010-11-16T08:46:19.857-06:00Thanks everyone. And HD rocks, here Trilogy is am...Thanks everyone. And HD rocks, here Trilogy is amazing. (but nothing like Tolkein's, though that's great also).Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-90113765272692343792010-11-16T08:36:27.548-06:002010-11-16T08:36:27.548-06:00I'm inspired..I'd listen to HD, too!I'm inspired..I'd listen to HD, too!Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-2409174183422213392010-11-16T03:03:31.195-06:002010-11-16T03:03:31.195-06:00Good work of capturing the feeling of having a voi...Good work of capturing the feeling of having a void inside you! My favorite lines:<br />"Some days<br />The words don’t come<br />And the rain does"Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-75353488733224044232010-11-15T22:48:29.152-06:002010-11-15T22:48:29.152-06:00Oh, this resonates with me...I've felt this.
...Oh, this resonates with me...I've felt this.<br /><br />Beautiful poem.TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-66886621182605421402010-11-15T20:42:35.586-06:002010-11-15T20:42:35.586-06:00This was lovely. I could relate to your words so ...This was lovely. I could relate to your words so well... Your heart (and writing) are wonderfully full and inspiring.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-67303626815206977002010-11-15T19:41:15.538-06:002010-11-15T19:41:15.538-06:00Thank you! :o)Thank you! :o)Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-54591964063713566352010-11-15T17:42:44.696-06:002010-11-15T17:42:44.696-06:00happens to me too - but, looks like inspiration st...happens to me too - but, looks like inspiration stalked you, caught up with you after all :) - lovely write!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-39433217388004163212010-11-15T17:40:44.498-06:002010-11-15T17:40:44.498-06:00you're right. inspiraton doesn't come easy...you're right. inspiraton doesn't come easy. sometimes no matter how hard we try, it's all just "empty." what a concise yet brilliant piece!Bing Yaphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01562123246667338670noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-10806344162963325242010-11-15T15:56:09.557-06:002010-11-15T15:56:09.557-06:00I think this is something all writers can identify...I think this is something all writers can identify with! Like it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-31457228325725333452010-11-15T13:31:56.709-06:002010-11-15T13:31:56.709-06:00My previous comment should have read thank you all...My previous comment should have read thank you all, and thank you too David.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-10328563087976750002010-11-15T11:43:05.846-06:002010-11-15T11:43:05.846-06:00wonderful expression...much said with few words.
...wonderful expression...much said with few words.<br /><br />cheersAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-39983737096698428232010-11-15T11:33:20.174-06:002010-11-15T11:33:20.174-06:00Thank you both!Thank you both!Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-66237190599287811152010-11-15T11:17:42.215-06:002010-11-15T11:17:42.215-06:00Inspiration's never a constant. What works one...Inspiration's never a constant. What works one day, might not the next - sadness or joy; so it goes. Nice contribution to the potluck!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-42055131798751433462010-11-15T10:59:48.875-06:002010-11-15T10:59:48.875-06:00great expression of emotions.
Thanks for linking u...great expression of emotions.<br />Thanks for linking up.<br />love your entry, cute and compact.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-10366261741523799352010-11-15T10:53:56.413-06:002010-11-15T10:53:56.413-06:00That last line makes the poem really sad. Very cle...That last line makes the poem really sad. Very cleverly added there.<br /><br />http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2010/11/15/i-need-him/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-76181670622321222572010-11-15T10:33:30.834-06:002010-11-15T10:33:30.834-06:00Wonderful! love it!
thank youWonderful! love it!<br /><br /><br />thank youHopehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07423174840229628807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-44520381900818422322010-11-15T10:29:44.436-06:002010-11-15T10:29:44.436-06:00wohoho- you wrote yourself a nice one- minute but ...wohoho- you wrote yourself a nice one- minute but wholesomely meaningful..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com