tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post1582319929954826046..comments2023-10-10T10:13:23.885-05:00Comments on Writing in the Bachs: Poetry Potluck, loveOther Maryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-85306075710047173242010-10-28T13:37:50.515-05:002010-10-28T13:37:50.515-05:00Thanks so much Luke. The first one is my fav too....Thanks so much Luke. The first one is my fav too.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-59152695736191982062010-10-28T05:33:42.267-05:002010-10-28T05:33:42.267-05:00I have to say, your first one is very clever and s...I have to say, your first one is very clever and such an uncliched take on a topic that is probably the hardest to write on without getting trite/cliched. Brilliant little piece, IMO. Enjoyed the other too, but the urgency and surprising impact of the first really got me. Bravo. You write well<br /><br />Luke @ WordSaladAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-71451792669027339462010-10-26T12:42:57.019-05:002010-10-26T12:42:57.019-05:00@ Eric: Hahaha - I read it as tickled too!
@ Flaub...@ Eric: Hahaha - I read it as tickled too!<br />@ Flaubert - thanks :o)Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-15763454379691500692010-10-26T11:16:36.708-05:002010-10-26T11:16:36.708-05:00Mary,
"let's pretend" that is a nice...Mary,<br />"let's pretend" that is a nice touch.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-79510253749117772932010-10-26T10:37:49.384-05:002010-10-26T10:37:49.384-05:00LOL! I just re-read my post and realized that I t...LOL! I just re-read my post and realized that I typoed 'tickled' as 'ticked' (D'OH!)<br /><br />I meant that your entries TICKLED me, Mary.<br />(I'm not ticked off or anything like that) :)Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-25664808628767681852010-10-26T00:07:42.038-05:002010-10-26T00:07:42.038-05:00I enjoyed both your poems so much. Oh, the second ...I enjoyed both your poems so much. Oh, the second one..."let's pretend"...yes, I think that is a part of love...maybe the magic part?TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-28391533338665492362010-10-25T23:18:29.364-05:002010-10-25T23:18:29.364-05:00Thanks :o)Thanks :o)Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-47098168606002875222010-10-25T18:59:20.141-05:002010-10-25T18:59:20.141-05:00This is an all true sentiment, "let's pre...This is an all true sentiment, "let's pretend then...", and yet to truly love is to give as much as possible and how is it possible not to hurt and be hurt when baring ourselves. This touched my heart. :))Eaton Bennett aka Berenice Albrechthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15155384243916982826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-67511000901518701602010-10-25T17:26:37.235-05:002010-10-25T17:26:37.235-05:00Thank you all, and thanks for the Potluck, what fu...Thank you all, and thanks for the Potluck, what fun!Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-35271268627789810342010-10-25T13:14:39.572-05:002010-10-25T13:14:39.572-05:00we need to pretend and mend,
love is fragile.we need to pretend and mend,<br />love is fragile.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-9833558497323608142010-10-25T12:49:31.191-05:002010-10-25T12:49:31.191-05:00haha lets pretend the i dont like this - but i do ...haha lets pretend the i dont like this - but i do really!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-44279110149112935562010-10-25T12:04:33.404-05:002010-10-25T12:04:33.404-05:00Your entries ticked me, Mary.
Welcome to Poetry P...Your entries ticked me, Mary.<br /><br />Welcome to Poetry Potluck!Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-43080669812221364662010-10-25T11:11:47.601-05:002010-10-25T11:11:47.601-05:00Glad you stopped by poetry potluck. Love how your ...Glad you stopped by poetry potluck. Love how your poem flows...the rhyme and meter just draws the reader in.<br />VictoriaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-76348497406441056742010-10-25T11:06:54.683-05:002010-10-25T11:06:54.683-05:00A fine game indeed! Let's pretend, and it can...A fine game indeed! Let's pretend, and it can come true. Thanks.annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-59681909854640267702010-10-25T11:03:09.597-05:002010-10-25T11:03:09.597-05:00Meet with octopi for tea - lovely! I love this. ...Meet with octopi for tea - lovely! I love this. I love how it repeats. Simply beautiful!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com