tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post2121652079714870495..comments2023-10-10T10:13:23.885-05:00Comments on Writing in the Bachs: Morning ChoresOther Maryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comBlogger45125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-81868457162693149752014-03-28T08:34:24.334-05:002014-03-28T08:34:24.334-05:00Thanks Shay, I've changed it now. :o)Thanks Shay, I've changed it now. :o)Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-26827930610399102532014-01-15T23:41:29.604-06:002014-01-15T23:41:29.604-06:00I was sucked right into the first poem - I was the...I was sucked right into the first poem - I was there (actually often am). I liked the shorter version!Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-85202941694109254242014-01-14T12:37:58.639-06:002014-01-14T12:37:58.639-06:00I like the second one best; it reads more poetical...I like the second one best; it reads more poetically, to me. One quibble, since you've asked: you use the word "this" twice in a very short space near the end. Perhaps it would read better as "I could live forever in the contentment that fills this space", substituting "the" for one of the "this"s. Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-83466118540936300242014-01-13T21:56:02.507-06:002014-01-13T21:56:02.507-06:00Wow. Based on your post, it sounds like a busy day...Wow. Based on your post, it sounds like a busy day at the barn. Thanks for sharing. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10304701332216772385noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-43861469007310633722014-01-13T10:40:40.546-06:002014-01-13T10:40:40.546-06:00I enjoy that invitation to join your "corner&...I enjoy that invitation to join your "corner" of the world. I really enjoyed both poems. Many thanks.<br /><br />Greetings from London.A Cuban In Londonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16423293358605007539noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-9721905542553207082014-01-12T16:56:51.018-06:002014-01-12T16:56:51.018-06:00You're welcome Ginny, though I don't have ...You're welcome Ginny, though I don't have horses any longer. I'm sorry to say this is from a previous life. And thanks for your input.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-72307339833411829482014-01-12T16:54:38.040-06:002014-01-12T16:54:38.040-06:00:o):o)Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-17490189817845970592014-01-12T06:21:05.151-06:002014-01-12T06:21:05.151-06:00Ah, cats!Ah, cats!John (@bookdreamer)https://www.blogger.com/profile/11576434749272275190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-50010275322416076322014-01-11T19:29:38.119-06:002014-01-11T19:29:38.119-06:00Thank you for a glimpse into your world. I knew yo...Thank you for a glimpse into your world. I knew you had cats and at least one dog, Otis, but am somewhat unaware of the rest of your menagerie! This is lovely. I can smell the hay, hear the horses breathing, feel the cats rubbing your legs. I can see where your contentment and peace lie! Lovely. BTW, rather like the longer version, myself.Ginny Brannanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-79260969312972769082014-01-11T15:43:26.524-06:002014-01-11T15:43:26.524-06:00It's wonderful smell Claudia. Glad it worked....It's wonderful smell Claudia. Glad it worked.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-55024291948121093872014-01-11T15:39:54.838-06:002014-01-11T15:39:54.838-06:00Thank you much Ron. Thank you much Ron. Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-45600061694473946292014-01-11T15:28:32.406-06:002014-01-11T15:28:32.406-06:00Thank you Sandra.Thank you Sandra.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-30672749833804539422014-01-11T13:59:40.058-06:002014-01-11T13:59:40.058-06:00Both wonderful visuals. I especially liked the fir...Both wonderful visuals. I especially liked the first one.Sandra Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03814573408898140885noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-7342077374114837752014-01-11T13:55:44.155-06:002014-01-11T13:55:44.155-06:00Yes, thanks Alan.Yes, thanks Alan.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-70587072920591783932014-01-11T13:44:15.853-06:002014-01-11T13:44:15.853-06:00And any other suggestions I get.And any other suggestions I get.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-91325230198044482052014-01-11T13:43:44.385-06:002014-01-11T13:43:44.385-06:00Hey thanks Brian! You certainly didn't overst...Hey thanks Brian! You certainly didn't overstep. When I finish doing comments, etc. I'll do some fiddling with thiese, and your suggestions. Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-23438663756748710742014-01-11T13:42:20.309-06:002014-01-11T13:42:20.309-06:00Thanks Becky. :o)Thanks Becky. :o)Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-41647591421504112702014-01-11T13:37:32.073-06:002014-01-11T13:37:32.073-06:00Haha - thanks Nico. I will probably end up with s...Haha - thanks Nico. I will probably end up with some hybrid of the two here along with some of Brian's suggestions. I'll keep you comment about the first two lines in mind too. I appreciate the input.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-52317565075381988582014-01-11T13:31:10.774-06:002014-01-11T13:31:10.774-06:00I agree Anthony. Thanks.I agree Anthony. Thanks.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-1501941041637289842014-01-11T12:36:35.977-06:002014-01-11T12:36:35.977-06:00:o) Thanks Nara.:o) Thanks Nara.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-21438081813739605952014-01-11T12:22:27.974-06:002014-01-11T12:22:27.974-06:00Thanks Anna. :o)Thanks Anna. :o)Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-78824812783073487552014-01-11T12:22:06.744-06:002014-01-11T12:22:06.744-06:00Thank you Abhra.Thank you Abhra.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-83665602041879951912014-01-11T12:21:37.723-06:002014-01-11T12:21:37.723-06:00Thank you ds.Thank you ds.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-56377614129084740382014-01-11T12:13:47.843-06:002014-01-11T12:13:47.843-06:00Thanks Galen. Enjoy your weekend too. :o)Thanks Galen. Enjoy your weekend too. :o)Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-41163408098190873532014-01-11T12:12:02.827-06:002014-01-11T12:12:02.827-06:00Thanks Cloudia.Thanks Cloudia.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.com