tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post5248658047254555713..comments2023-10-10T10:13:23.885-05:00Comments on Writing in the Bachs: Escape ClauseOther Maryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-33936376184066831402014-04-18T01:18:38.185-05:002014-04-18T01:18:38.185-05:00whoa. except I'm not limber enough to chew my ...whoa. except I'm not limber enough to chew my foot off. have to be my wrist. ~Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-58750041170707498892014-04-17T22:36:37.624-05:002014-04-17T22:36:37.624-05:00chewing off your foot is such a strong visual of b...chewing off your foot is such a strong visual of being trapped. great write.Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-37468551080565835482014-04-17T18:11:44.467-05:002014-04-17T18:11:44.467-05:00Well you can mount it on the wall if you really ha...Well you can mount it on the wall if you really have to chew it off lolPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-32843113955703290802014-04-17T01:18:49.398-05:002014-04-17T01:18:49.398-05:00I have been there. You captured the feeling perfec...I have been there. You captured the feeling perfectly.Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-65278919055776186292014-04-17T00:26:57.528-05:002014-04-17T00:26:57.528-05:00I was horrified, as a little girl, when I learned ...I was horrified, as a little girl, when I learned that there were traps that caught animals by their feet and that there were animals that would chew their foot off to escape. This poem reminded me of those feelings. Heidihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02757679752138734026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-67366976236881411252014-04-16T20:04:13.707-05:002014-04-16T20:04:13.707-05:00I like the heavy imagery of feeling "trapped&...I like the heavy imagery of feeling "trapped" in this, that "chewing off" one's foot really makes you feel this. Well done, Mary.Ginny Brannanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-19662401740072430082014-04-16T17:45:03.981-05:002014-04-16T17:45:03.981-05:00Civilization and it's discontents does bedevil...Civilization and it's discontents does bedevil is creative types :-)<br /><br /><br /><br />ALOHA from Honolulu<br /><a href="http://comfortspiral.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">ComfortSpiral</a><br /> <br />=^..^= <3<br />Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-16226008288144747202014-04-16T17:44:10.595-05:002014-04-16T17:44:10.595-05:00This comment has been removed by the author.Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.com