tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post6957119251451455376..comments2023-10-10T10:13:23.885-05:00Comments on Writing in the Bachs: tenWord WinterOther Maryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comBlogger36125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-38316080348137329432015-02-03T22:34:29.542-06:002015-02-03T22:34:29.542-06:00Oh, this captured human emotion all right. In spad...Oh, this captured human emotion all right. In spades! I know and feel the grief and what you describe, and that last line is sheer perfection. This is a treasure.Lydiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11135393270656573516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-83370830137001066142015-01-27T08:04:42.135-06:002015-01-27T08:04:42.135-06:00Thank you very much Hannah. Thank you very much Hannah. Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-51931663254169357782015-01-18T19:35:06.887-06:002015-01-18T19:35:06.887-06:00Love the repetition and variation of the pairings ...Love the repetition and variation of the pairings with "winter." Nicely captured, Mary!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-4018455521164359872015-01-17T19:03:42.809-06:002015-01-17T19:03:42.809-06:00As dusk curls
around my shoulders
stars beckon me,...As dusk curls<br />around my shoulders<br />stars beckon me, "Come!"<br /><br />I like this! There is a finality. It completes the picture! Great lines Mary!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-64594548228835158092015-01-17T17:09:48.853-06:002015-01-17T17:09:48.853-06:00Thank you all for reading and commenting. I'v...Thank you all for reading and commenting. I've visited all of you too. :o)Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-13402526635692064262015-01-17T09:49:00.752-06:002015-01-17T09:49:00.752-06:00Lovely. Time stops in the winter temple. Yes. Than...Lovely. Time stops in the winter temple. Yes. Thank you.dshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07616750784052488695noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-10726954309205981022015-01-17T08:52:03.468-06:002015-01-17T08:52:03.468-06:00nice!nice!Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-51466750694184515752015-01-17T07:53:49.403-06:002015-01-17T07:53:49.403-06:00I enjoyed each one! It would be hard to choose a ...I enjoyed each one! It would be hard to choose a fav!annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-72898497540363308062015-01-17T07:10:07.024-06:002015-01-17T07:10:07.024-06:00that last one really stands out to me... all are s...that last one really stands out to me... all are spot onWolfsrosebudhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17295258422523621134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-71887622064757582842015-01-17T06:04:00.514-06:002015-01-17T06:04:00.514-06:00The second ten caught in my throat. So it is when...The second ten caught in my throat. So it is when that is where we remember our beloved dead.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-77587829466246235142015-01-17T00:54:24.415-06:002015-01-17T00:54:24.415-06:00some gorgeous imagery going on heresome gorgeous imagery going on hereSuyashJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06332045821743367072noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-17773409684116823082015-01-16T22:59:24.654-06:002015-01-16T22:59:24.654-06:00These are great.These are great.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-69756046578452510732015-01-16T21:11:31.850-06:002015-01-16T21:11:31.850-06:00I'm juggling between the first and second as f...I'm juggling between the first and second as favorites - both say so much and thrill me. Wonderfully done. Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-78364084024573202052015-01-16T21:04:34.077-06:002015-01-16T21:04:34.077-06:00I love all these...such few words giving such vivi...I love all these...such few words giving such vivid descriptionsSusie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-62158568858945311442015-01-16T17:45:24.995-06:002015-01-16T17:45:24.995-06:00These were all very lovely, but the last one just ...These were all very lovely, but the last one just captured me in the magic..Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-90428445803833794582015-01-16T17:28:38.778-06:002015-01-16T17:28:38.778-06:00You have expressed a lot through your four poems, ...You have expressed a lot through your four poems, Mary. And certainly conveyed emotion. I can feel some sadness and weariness in your lines and through the great imagery.Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-16714462834896522822015-01-16T16:48:44.378-06:002015-01-16T16:48:44.378-06:00I like these, Mary. As we progress, things show h...I like these, Mary. As we progress, things show have hope. Really hopeful with the last two.<br />Ten word saying sort of works. We know the situation, we just don't know either the why or the outcome. I tried it with mine, same thing. Brian is on.<br />..Jimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-4261175356737607602015-01-16T16:26:58.644-06:002015-01-16T16:26:58.644-06:00These are lovely, Mary.These are lovely, Mary.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-21704315094095948662015-01-16T16:17:03.454-06:002015-01-16T16:17:03.454-06:00The first is very emotional, I admire that ~ Can&...The first is very emotional, I admire that ~ Can't wait for the greening to come ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-90769794513631175412015-01-16T15:22:27.713-06:002015-01-16T15:22:27.713-06:00These are great. I have not done my ten.
These are great. I have not done my ten.<br />Gailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04219479223227928561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-49000907161374437662015-01-16T14:58:45.535-06:002015-01-16T14:58:45.535-06:00Very nice TenWord poems, Mary. Indeed, you have g...Very nice TenWord poems, Mary. Indeed, you have given a real picture of the chill that is in winter. My favorite is the one about shivering in a room while dreaming of green. I do that all the time. Smiles.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-63738519435111988772015-01-16T13:55:44.893-06:002015-01-16T13:55:44.893-06:00No one is listening anyway? Not if they're the...No one is listening anyway? Not if they're the right words. Thanks so much for being part of my challenge, Mary. I think you did just fine!Fireblossomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07040525704916368792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-18369849014426033022015-01-16T13:47:50.551-06:002015-01-16T13:47:50.551-06:00Wow, ten words seem to be all you need, & as i...Wow, ten words seem to be all you need, & as in many other cases, each stanza could stand alone, like a chain of haiku. I like the second stanza a lot. Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-76740895962088258372015-01-16T13:47:23.868-06:002015-01-16T13:47:23.868-06:00oh nice... i esp. love the dusk curling round the ...oh nice... i esp. love the dusk curling round the shoulders..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-859401242211888920.post-43001519120194628592015-01-16T13:35:17.557-06:002015-01-16T13:35:17.557-06:00These are all so beautiful and touching.These are all so beautiful and touching.Debi Swimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08255928985823418669noreply@blogger.com