There's something about poetry that saves me… ~ Martin Espada
Cool! I like the transition of personality to a salt shaker!
lovely..glad to see you link in..have fun.smiles.
Thanks abthomas and Jingle!
another flavor of the feast of love :)
A poem written with much cleverness and truth!
very "sweetly" written.
Wonderful use of taste as imagery. Great work! :)
Thank you all, much appreciate your stopping by to read!
Oh I like this! Too many treacly, sickly sweet lovely dovey sweethearts in this world. We need more savory, biting, and tart women! Hurrah!
Ooo, spicy! I like the imagery evoked in this piece, so sweet and yet so much power to it. Thanks for sharing with us!
Crisp and clear ! Sweet words of love ! :)
Thanks Lola, that's exactly what I thought about it!Leiffy-thanks...glad my salty language wasn't off-puttingAdreamygal - thank you :o)
This one is simple,elegant an true.Nice!
Thank you Umamaheswari!
I thought your poem was really cool. I thought the last line worked really well. Great job.