Sunday, May 26, 2013

Thermochemistry

     Image: Ponytail by Last Exit

I breathe you
in long, lovely inspirations

You fill my lungs,
circulate through my
blood stream,
fill me

Finally,
saturated, satiated
I dissolve into
you


*Thermochemistry is the study of the energy and heat associated with chemical reactions and/or physical transformations.

Written for The Mag creative writing site.  Click on the link and check it out.

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31 comments:

  1. Audrey Howitt aka DivaloungerMay 26, 2013 at 3:07 PM

    This is beautiful Mary!

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  2. hedgewitchMay 26, 2013 at 3:09 PM

    That is one weird, elusive pic, Mary--I am just astonished at how you made it illustrate your words so perfectly. Very cool.

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  3. Dana DampierMay 26, 2013 at 3:37 PM

    Wow... I love this!! I'm such a romantic and this poem really moves me!

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  4. LeoviMay 26, 2013 at 3:45 PM

    Exquisite love poem. I will be very happy if you write about a picture of me.

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  5. GailMay 26, 2013 at 4:06 PM

    Now that's one beautiful chemical reaction!!!

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  6. Brian MillerMay 26, 2013 at 4:33 PM

    smiles...i like...the taking in and the mingle together until you are one...lovely mary...

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  7. UnknownMay 26, 2013 at 4:53 PM

    Loved this chemistry lesson!

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  8. Pat HattMay 26, 2013 at 5:23 PM

    Inspiring the inspiration with no experation

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  9. HelenMay 26, 2013 at 7:15 PM

    I have utterly melted .... will have to be scraped up from my floor!

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  10. The Write GirlMay 26, 2013 at 9:03 PM

    Stunning, sublime, chemistry. Beautiful poem!

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  11. Beth WinterMay 26, 2013 at 9:28 PM

    Now that is chemistry. Gorgeous

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  12. 21 WitsMay 26, 2013 at 11:58 PM

    So deep, and a lovely poem which sent my thoughts in a whole other place, and then I read the interesting link to chemistry! Bravo!

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  13. anthonynorthMay 27, 2013 at 2:11 AM

    Beautiful - especially the ending.

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  14. AnonymousMay 27, 2013 at 2:25 AM

    You have me at the title!!! Wow love isn't even strong enough =)

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  15. SueannMay 27, 2013 at 3:25 AM

    Fun piece..takes me skillfully through your words!
    Hugs

    SueAnn

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  16. Doctor FTSEMay 27, 2013 at 4:29 AM

    Golly gosh! And there was me thinking thermodynamics was boring; your little poem suggests a chat-up line. "Tell me, are you exo or endothermic?"

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  17. Silent Otto May 27, 2013 at 7:54 AM

    Gday mate, thanks for taking us so deeply into your DNA! It really is an interesting place !

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  18. jabblogMay 27, 2013 at 12:14 PM

    What a fascinating response to the prompt:-)

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  19. JinksyMay 27, 2013 at 2:21 PM

    Not sure if it's you or the chemistry that's hot stuff! LOL

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  20. LynMay 27, 2013 at 2:30 PM

    Lovely lesson in Thermochemistry! This really floats..

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  21. Dave KingMay 28, 2013 at 5:51 AM

    Love this. Very original response.

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  22. HelenaMay 28, 2013 at 10:52 AM

    WoW. I really liked where the wisp of this one took us.....!

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  23. Laurie KolpMay 28, 2013 at 12:18 PM

    Beautiful in its simplicity... and thank you, Mary!

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  24. Other MaryMay 28, 2013 at 5:12 PM

    Thank you all for reading and commenting. I've returned the favor for you all. Cheers!

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  25. L. Edgar OttoMay 28, 2013 at 7:07 PM

    I like this interpretation... I am glad I found your blog long ago.

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  26. LydiaMay 30, 2013 at 5:17 AM

    This is not only beautiful, it is also educational! Really well done, Mary.

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  27. TruedessaMay 30, 2013 at 10:16 AM

    Lovely capture of words..

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  28. Tess KincaidMay 30, 2013 at 5:11 PM

    Beautiful...I love this...

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  29. MargaretJune 7, 2013 at 11:08 PM

    Mmmm hmmm. THIS is perfect for this image!

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  30. Other MaryJune 16, 2013 at 9:50 PM

    Thank you everyone. I appreciate your comments very much. I've stopped by to read your lovely works too! Cheers!

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  31. AnonymousJune 16, 2013 at 10:51 PM

    gorgeous

    Love that last line

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