Sunday, May 26, 2013

Thermochemistry

     Image: Ponytail by Last Exit

I breathe you
in long, lovely inspirations

You fill my lungs,
circulate through my
blood stream,
fill me

Finally,
saturated, satiated
I dissolve into
you


*Thermochemistry is the study of the energy and heat associated with chemical reactions and/or physical transformations.

Written for The Mag creative writing site.  Click on the link and check it out.

31 comments:

  1. That is one weird, elusive pic, Mary--I am just astonished at how you made it illustrate your words so perfectly. Very cool.

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  2. Wow... I love this!! I'm such a romantic and this poem really moves me!

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  3. Exquisite love poem. I will be very happy if you write about a picture of me.

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  4. Now that's one beautiful chemical reaction!!!

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  5. smiles...i like...the taking in and the mingle together until you are one...lovely mary...

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  6. Inspiring the inspiration with no experation

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  7. I have utterly melted .... will have to be scraped up from my floor!

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  8. Stunning, sublime, chemistry. Beautiful poem!

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  9. Now that is chemistry. Gorgeous

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  10. So deep, and a lovely poem which sent my thoughts in a whole other place, and then I read the interesting link to chemistry! Bravo!

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  11. Beautiful - especially the ending.

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  12. You have me at the title!!! Wow love isn't even strong enough =)

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  13. Fun piece..takes me skillfully through your words!
    Hugs

    SueAnn

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  14. Golly gosh! And there was me thinking thermodynamics was boring; your little poem suggests a chat-up line. "Tell me, are you exo or endothermic?"

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  15. Gday mate, thanks for taking us so deeply into your DNA! It really is an interesting place !

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  16. What a fascinating response to the prompt:-)

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  17. Not sure if it's you or the chemistry that's hot stuff! LOL

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  18. Lovely lesson in Thermochemistry! This really floats..

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  19. Love this. Very original response.

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  20. WoW. I really liked where the wisp of this one took us.....!

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  21. Beautiful in its simplicity... and thank you, Mary!

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  22. Thank you all for reading and commenting. I've returned the favor for you all. Cheers!

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  23. I like this interpretation... I am glad I found your blog long ago.

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  24. This is not only beautiful, it is also educational! Really well done, Mary.

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  25. Mmmm hmmm. THIS is perfect for this image!

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  26. Thank you everyone. I appreciate your comments very much. I've stopped by to read your lovely works too! Cheers!

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