Steps by Tess Kincaid
I reach for you like a dish.
You read to me over breakfast
while I pour coffee.
There is a coming
and going sort of rhythm
to us.
We are everyday
spoons and forks
not good silver people.
The stairs leading to our room
are well worn.
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A beautiful poem, funny!
ReplyDeleteThank you Leovi.
DeleteAh, this sounds like heaven .. once in a lifetime love.
ReplyDeleteThank you Helen. :o)
DeleteYou have been there a long time, or you are at it a lot! A gentle funny poem... my favourites.
ReplyDeleteLol, thanks.
Deleteeveryday beats the silver crap any day, walk on
ReplyDeleteThanks, I think so too Pat.
DeleteBeautiful.
ReplyDeleteThank you Shay.
DeleteI love that "good silver sort of people" part. Well done!
ReplyDeleteCheers Teresa. I'm definately an everyday spoon. :o)
DeleteAh, those well worn steps, to their room, say it all! Lovely write.
ReplyDeleteThank you Karen.
DeleteBeautiful!
ReplyDeleteHey thanks MZ!
DeletePlain and simple life, eh?
ReplyDeleteYup, pretty much.
DeleteHi Ho Silver .....Away !
ReplyDeletei am kinda glad i am not a good silver kinda person...
ReplyDeleteand that is not a bad rhythm to have either...smiles.
happy monday mary
Thanks Brian. Your comments always make me smile too. Hope you have a good day as well.
DeleteComfortable folks, the kind I like to hang out with, the kind of love I aspire to.
ReplyDeleteMe too! Thanks Mary.
DeleteLoved it Mary
ReplyDeleteBeautifully done.
I like spooning too! . . . lol
Managed to get mine done eventually
Thanks Eddie. I'll go and have a look at yours now.
DeleteWell that is good worn path to follow..enjoyed your poem..
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Truedessa.
DeleteBrilliant. A great sense of 'closeness' and love.
ReplyDeleteThanks Cait.
DeleteYes, there is a comforting feel about those stairs, like old cutlery or slippers.
ReplyDeleteThank you JC
DeleteExquisite. There is a well-worn love in those stairs.
ReplyDeleteThanks Buddah.
DeleteA truly simple life!
ReplyDeleteYes, common and everyday.
DeleteYou had me with that first line...loved this...
ReplyDeleteThank you Tess. x
DeleteWhat a wonderful life you live....beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThank you Carrie. :o)
DeleteThus is so beautiful...a fill life.
ReplyDeleteThank you Cheryl. Sorry I didn't see your comment sooner.
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