Photo Grocery from Tess Kincaid
At the corner store
are piled apples, oranges, potatoes
and onions enough
to make you cry
with the cutting of them,
but that just takes one.
And shoppers touch the fruits
and the vegetables -
I won’t even mention
the ogling of melons,
or the squeezing of tomatoes;
that is too much
firm fruit for this page.
But there is this concentration
of life, of juices, of vegetable matter,
some of it is still ripening;
and though we cling to life like a peach,
out back, the dumpster
is full of molding pears and cabbages.
My dead grandmother used to say
when you are old
your skin gets rotten like a banana.
We are all
ripening and rotting,
every fruit and vegetable and shopper
reaching for a peach,
every person walking past,
too busy to stop
but not able
to rush, or race-walk, or outrun
their own mortality.
And in the end, we all end.
And it is sad, if the life, or the fruit, or
the vegetable
was good at all.
But, despite the dumpster full
of endings,
the store front
still draws us in.
We want the fresh fruit,
the sweet bite,
the juices running down our chins.
So savor it,
beginning, middle, end.
This is for Magpie Tales writing group hosted by the talented Tess Kincaid. Come join us!
Gosh Mary - - - that was so powerful.
ReplyDeleteHope we last a bit longer than an orange or a tomato.
So you see the store as an analogy of life - what a great idea!!!.
Very clever, well thought out and delivered.
. . . and I feel like a banana right now (to eat - not to be wrinkled lol)
Thanks Eddie! I was a bit longwinded about it, but got there in the end. Enjoy your snack!
ReplyDeleteWell! This is quite the recipe for living! I loved every word.
ReplyDeleteAwwww - thanks Helen! x
DeleteA beautiful and wise write Mary...I love it!!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Carrie!
Deletevery pungent and smart-
ReplyDeleteThank you Kathe. :o)
DeleteI'm rotting? Crap, better get some air fresheners lol
ReplyDeleteWell...we all are a bit, lol.
DeleteWhat a variation on life's a bowl of cherries...
ReplyDeleteHaha - yes, so many fruity sayings!
DeleteOh i like the Entropy and Thanatos here , but there is also Eros ...cheers Mary
ReplyDeleteWhat's life, and death, without a little Eros? Thanks Kutamun - cheers!
ReplyDelete"(I won’t even mention
ReplyDeletethe ogling of melons,
or the squeezing of tomatoes;
that is too much
firm fruit for this page)"
What a lovely bite for the senses.
Heheh - thanks Magaly.
DeleteWow Mary, a lot of deep thought going on.
ReplyDelete"My dead grandmother used to say
when you are old
your skin gets rotten like a banana."
A good analogy, as elderly bruise dark bruises so easily.
I think I will stay with the fresh fruit in the front of the store for awhile longer...
It was actually my great grandma who said that when she was quite old.
DeleteAnd I"m with you, I hope to stay out of the dumpster for as long as possible! lol
Lovely poem, I like the vivid imagery.
ReplyDeleteThank you Silver!
ReplyDeleteHiya Mary, such a warm pleasure to be back here - its like a warm glow... Love your organic theme and the lyrical conversational flow to this piece, which is evocative and successfully realised. Altogether a lovely addition to my weekend... With Love & Light Scott www.scotthastie.com
ReplyDeleteThank you Scott! Your comment was trapped awating moderation and I didn't see it until just now...so very late. I appreciate your kind words and hope that autumn is a productive season for you.
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