Thursday, November 11, 2010

Mag # 40


After the party
She carelessly set aside
The trappings of her
Disguise

22 comments:

  1. I love the back story this poem invokes in my mind.

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  2. Nice interpretation of the photo ... a lovely Magpie!

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  3. wow I love that it reminds me of a mask ball. NICE

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  4. Dear Mary,
    This is so well written. The image couldn't be any better than this.. :)

    Lovely one.. xxx

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  5. I hope that you have enjoyed your participation at our Monday Potluck, we love your talent and appreciate your willingness to share.
    You are welcome join us this coming Monday for another week of fun, old poems or poems unrelated to our theme are welcome.
    Let me know if you need further assistance.
    You Rock!
    xoxox

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  6. Thank you all.

    Olivia, I really enjoy the Potluck and the feedback. I feel fortunate to have found this community of writers :o) Thank you so much!

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  7. this is simply powerful,
    love your tale.

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  8. I dig that this so abruptly leaves you wanting more! It's like "Wait!!!!"

    Well done.

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  9. Thanks Jingle, but not sure I know what you're talking about.

    Thank you Rabbit. Most of my posts will be brief the next few weeks, as I have another project taking up a big chunk of time. I really enjoy these poetry prompts and feedback though!

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  10. I know the feeling well. Evocative.

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  11. like the masking aspect of this...nice...bkm

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  12. Much intrigue within your words... what lies beyond the Disguise?

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  13. You could be writing about me! Perfect.

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