Thursday, November 11, 2010

Mag # 40


After the party
She carelessly set aside
The trappings of her
Disguise
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20 comments:

  1. JBinford-BellNovember 11, 2010 at 12:43 PM

    I love the back story this poem invokes in my mind.

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  2. Brigid O'ConnorNovember 11, 2010 at 12:53 PM

    Lovely, subtle piece.

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  3. BerowneNovember 11, 2010 at 5:37 PM

    Nicely done...

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  4. HelenNovember 11, 2010 at 6:30 PM

    Nice interpretation of the photo ... a lovely Magpie!

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  5. Kristen HaskellNovember 11, 2010 at 8:45 PM

    wow I love that it reminds me of a mask ball. NICE

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  6. OliviaNovember 12, 2010 at 2:47 AM

    Dear Mary,
    This is so well written. The image couldn't be any better than this.. :)

    Lovely one.. xxx

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  7. OliviaNovember 12, 2010 at 2:48 AM

    I hope that you have enjoyed your participation at our Monday Potluck, we love your talent and appreciate your willingness to share.
    You are welcome join us this coming Monday for another week of fun, old poems or poems unrelated to our theme are welcome.
    Let me know if you need further assistance.
    You Rock!
    xoxox

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  8. Other MaryNovember 12, 2010 at 6:22 AM

    Thank you all.

    Olivia, I really enjoy the Potluck and the feedback. I feel fortunate to have found this community of writers :o) Thank you so much!

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  9. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallNovember 12, 2010 at 11:55 AM

    this is simply powerful,
    love your tale.

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  10. Crayotic RamblingsNovember 12, 2010 at 3:57 PM

    I dig that this so abruptly leaves you wanting more! It's like "Wait!!!!"

    Well done.

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  11. Other MaryNovember 12, 2010 at 4:06 PM

    Thanks Jingle, but not sure I know what you're talking about.

    Thank you Rabbit. Most of my posts will be brief the next few weeks, as I have another project taking up a big chunk of time. I really enjoy these poetry prompts and feedback though!

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  12. Uma AnandaneNovember 12, 2010 at 5:36 PM

    simple yet elegant.Liked it

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  13. Other MaryNovember 13, 2010 at 5:33 AM

    Thank you Uma :o)

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  14. Tess KincaidNovember 13, 2010 at 11:02 AM

    I know the feeling well. Evocative.

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  15. signed...bkmNovember 13, 2010 at 5:02 PM

    like the masking aspect of this...nice...bkm

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  16. Other MaryNovember 14, 2010 at 11:56 AM

    :o) Thanks!

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  17. AnonymousNovember 14, 2010 at 4:05 PM

    so few words convey a world of intrigue... disturbing deuce

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  18. ReflectionsNovember 15, 2010 at 2:36 PM

    Much intrigue within your words... what lies beyond the Disguise?

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  19. Carrie Van HornNovember 15, 2010 at 6:16 PM

    I love this Mary! :-)

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  20. The Blog of BeeNovember 17, 2010 at 9:54 AM

    You could be writing about me! Perfect.

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