Thursday, December 9, 2010

Wild Ride - Magpie Tales #44


We start at the top -
One great push
And we’re off!
Gathering momentum
We sail through
A chaos of cold
With the rope
Twisted ‘round your frozen fingers
My feet push
One way then another
Steering together
Through crazy twists and turns
Over wild bumps and humps
Until the end when we fall apart
Breathless and laughing
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Darling, let’s go again!

14 comments:

  1. I really dig "A chaos of cold" - it's so fitting.

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  2. *placing fingers & toes in the warmer* :)

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  3. I'm all about embracing the chaos this week! Love this.

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  4. beautiful sentiments,
    love the details,
    your words drew us in.
    Happy Thursday!
    Elegant magpie.

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  5. "Over wild bumps and humps"
    this sentence is big time fun!

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  6. This is full of fun ...breathless and laughing, wonderful.

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  7. Thank you all! What a fun Mag pic!

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  8. Well done! Sounds like a typical day in life...enjoy the ride and get back on to do it yet again...

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  9. Yes, one more time....this is wonderful Mary! :-)

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  10. Ah, thank you all! And with snow in the forcast here I may well be doing that soon! :o)

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  11. I thought this was about sledding, but at the end I wondered if the whole thing had a sexual subtext... (or have I just got a dirty mind?)

    Best

    Luke @ WordSalad

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