Tuesday, April 12, 2011

Shadorma - One Stop Poetry



Here is my second attempt at a the poetic from called Shadorma which Anne Welch describes so well at One Stop Poetry. And the photo inspiration for this is from Tess Kincade's Magpie Tales.

    Image from mounterrigal.com

Velvety
deep panacea
Cabernet
Sauvignon
reflecting a life misspent
enjoyed to the dregs
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7 comments:

  1. Lorenzo — Alchemist's PillowApril 12, 2011 at 4:58 PM

    I like the ambivalence suggested by panacea, misspent and, especially, "enjoyed to the dregs".

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  2. Other MaryApril 12, 2011 at 5:52 PM

    Thanks Lorenzo, that's what I was going for.

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  3. Joseph HeschApril 12, 2011 at 6:13 PM

    You've captured the essence of this photograph and the mixed blessing of wine enjoyed to the bottom of the bottle. Isn't that how we're supposed to consume life, too? Wonderfully evocative use of language, Mary. Thanks.

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  4. T F CarthickApril 12, 2011 at 10:21 PM

    Wow! Amazing how you got the same idea and also the idea to post for the same picture and as shadorma too. As you said great minds think alike, eh?

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  5. Other MaryApril 13, 2011 at 7:07 AM

    Joe - I appreciate your comment.

    Fool - Isn't that surprising? I hope it's great minds, not foolish ones!

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  6. AnonymousApril 13, 2011 at 5:52 PM

    great Shadorma Mary. Kudos

    Luke x

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  7. Other MaryApril 14, 2011 at 7:10 AM

    Thanks Luke.

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