Friday, May 20, 2011

Love?

Love...

It strikes like a bolt of lightening
out of the blue;
and we are left,
wondering where to hide the bodies

This is a repost that seems to fit OSP (One Stop Poetry) Friday Poetically's theme.  Click on the title to go there.

26 comments:

  1. whew...where to hide the bodies...love it, it marched to the beat of a different drum...

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  2. Love can certainly feel like a lightening strike.

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  3. Yes lightning bolt it really will
    Sometimes might be a thrill
    But the bodies pile up
    Maybe I could get a hole dug by a pup

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  4. All in fun...I really don't have all that many bodies to hide!

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  5. What a witty poem in 4 lines! I really laughed aloud at the final line.

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  6. Kerry - Thanks, this is what I must resort to so I don't go all sappy :o)

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  7. Cute and clever!
    I like this one Mary, very witty :-)

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  8. wow - just 4 lines and such a picture! wow!

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  9. Thanks Hope, Claudia and PU :o)

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  10. HA! No doubt. The proverbial force of nature personified. I always worry more about the Frankenstein effect, myself.

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  11. Laughing...I think Eric 'Bubba' Alder has the right idea!

    Nice write Mary.
    Thanks for sharing.

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  12. Now that's a little shocker for a Saturday! A fellow Cynic-- yay! xxxj

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  13. This is awesome! You've captured the essence of love in just four lines!

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  14. Eric - good thinking!
    Hedge - oooh, yikes, that could be shocking!
    Andy - thanks
    Jen - yay - cynics unite (and dyslexics untie!)
    Mystic M - thank you

    thanks for reading all!

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  15. Oh, and Hedgewitch thanks for following!

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  16. Ha, other Mary, I like. Great words, wit, passion.

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  17. Love feel like a lighting bolt to jolt you back to life.Thanks you

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  18. Cuts to the core, doesn't it? Powerful few lines here.

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  19. Leah - sometimes it does, and sometimes it burns. Thanks for following me!

    Kkrige - Agreed. Thank you.

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  20. Henry - Thanks for that - just gotta laugh sometimes.

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