There's something about poetry that saves me… ~ Martin Espada
whew...where to hide the bodies...love it, it marched to the beat of a different drum...
Love can certainly feel like a lightening strike.
Yes lightning bolt it really willSometimes might be a thrillBut the bodies pile upMaybe I could get a hole dug by a pup
All in fun...I really don't have all that many bodies to hide!
What a witty poem in 4 lines! I really laughed aloud at the final line.
Kerry - Thanks, this is what I must resort to so I don't go all sappy :o)
Cute and clever! I like this one Mary, very witty :-)
perfect! love it!
wow - just 4 lines and such a picture! wow!
Yes a deft use of 4 lines!
Thanks Hope, Claudia and PU :o)
Hide 'em under the sheets. ;)
HA! No doubt. The proverbial force of nature personified. I always worry more about the Frankenstein effect, myself.
Laughing...I think Eric 'Bubba' Alder has the right idea!Nice write Mary.Thanks for sharing.
Now that's a little shocker for a Saturday! A fellow Cynic-- yay! xxxj
This is awesome! You've captured the essence of love in just four lines!
Eric - good thinking!Hedge - oooh, yikes, that could be shocking!Andy - thanksJen - yay - cynics unite (and dyslexics untie!)Mystic M - thank youthanks for reading all!
Oh, and Hedgewitch thanks for following!
Ha, other Mary, I like. Great words, wit, passion.
Love feel like a lighting bolt to jolt you back to life.Thanks you
Cuts to the core, doesn't it? Powerful few lines here.
Leah - sometimes it does, and sometimes it burns. Thanks for following me!Kkrige - Agreed. Thank you.
Henry - Thanks for that - just gotta laugh sometimes.