Self portrait,Vivlan Maier
Generally when one tries to tinker
with eternity
it does not end well.
The stoutest knots
come undone,
and ends once again
flap loose.
But still there is this
hope
for a sense of
grand purpose,
or at least
a reason to get up each morning,
to brush one’s teeth,
to wash,
to put on one’s
shoes,
one’s shirt,
one’s mask.
And in the meantime
one goes on,
for there are children to be fed
and dishes to be washed
and bills to be paid,
despite the
receding hallway filled
with an overflow of string and boxes
and failed attempts.
And sometimes,
amid the clutter and minutia,
without realizing it,
we get the lighting
and the composition right,
and just sometimes in our wake
we leave something
beautiful.
Photo prompt provided by Tess Kincaid at Magpie Tales. Join us!
So true- well expressed
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Anjum!
DeleteAnd gosh aren't we all tinkering with it every day!
ReplyDeleteALOHA from Honolulu
ComfortSpiral
=^..^= . <3
Aloha Cloudia! Thanks.
DeleteYeah, funny, I love to flirt with eternity!
ReplyDeleteEternity is such a flirt, lol.
DeleteVery true, a little tinker and fine tuning and you never know what will show
ReplyDeleteRightPat, you never know till you try.
Deletebravo! Perfectly said-
ReplyDeleteThanks Kathe! :o)
Deleteand just sometimes in our wake
ReplyDeletewe leave something
beautiful.
Yes, tinkering along and saving them in whatever devices. Not just sometimes but if only all the time! Nicely Other Mary!
Hank
Thank you so much Hank!
DeleteKeep on keeping on, Mrs Dalloway ...
ReplyDeleteAwww...I love that you called me Mrs. D.! xo
DeleteSomething beautiful, yes, our loves, our words, ourselves.
ReplyDelete"a sense of grand purpose"...love that Other Mary!
ReplyDeleteWe all love beauty. It's nice to have a purpose in life.
ReplyDeleteMy favorite so far. I love where you went with this, and you went there masterfully.
ReplyDelete=)
Lovely...this might be my favorite of yours to date...
ReplyDeleteWell put. Those moments of beauty and perfection amidst the craziness and imperfection of life are great.
ReplyDeleteOh Mary!!!! I love love love this!!!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem Mary, thank you for sharing it with us
ReplyDeleteHow beautifully worded. It is true that we go through life, feeding the kids, washing the dishes, dealing with bills, and it's amazing when we can find some beauty in all of it.
ReplyDeleteI love the idea that we can leave something beautiful, even if we don't notice it. Lovely poem.
ReplyDeleteQuite lovely. I agree, you've created something beautiful within your lines as well!
ReplyDeleteA hallway filled "With an overflow of string and boxes..." You've seen my place? Excellent post, by the way.
ReplyDeleteThank you all! Apologies for not keeping up answering your comments, but I have visited and read your pieces and commented on them. Cheers everyone!
ReplyDeleteI so want to see Maier's exhibit. You catch this well ~
ReplyDeleteMe too! The online pics are good, but I'd love to see the exhibit in person too. And thank you!
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