Wednesday, June 1, 2011

Strike


Erratic Lightening
a luminous omen of
primordial fear


This is my first submission 3 Word Wednesday whose words this week are Erratic, Lumionus and Omen.  Just for fun I tried to us as few other words as I could, thus the Haiku.  Click on the title to go there. 

17 comments:

  1. a haiku is a lovely way to use to the words. you did well. glad you have you joining us.

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  2. Powerful and consise in the best spirit of haiku!

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  3. You linked the words beautifully.

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  4. I liked your poem greatly. We live in the same state you know, so I identify with this lightnihg. Like you, I wrote a short poem, darker than yours, I think.

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  5. You certainly don't need any more words than those..they slice through like a lightening bolt..have you not been on TWW before..it's good to see you! Jae

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  6. Jessica - thank you!

    Stafford & Rinkly - Thanks, good to 'see' you again.

    FNDBWLW - thanks!

    Mary - I didn't know you are from WI! Cool. I'll have a look at yours.

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  7. Jae - This was my first TWW. I've seen it before but never participated. Thanks for your comment :o)

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  8. you packed three words in a Haiku.
    excellent job.
    Glad to see you write for more challenges.

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  9. You nailed it with a perfect haiku. Pretty darn great for a first attempt.

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  10. I agree with Mike, brilliant Haiku with those three words. Cheers.

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  11. Cool bananas, I love that word 'primordial'.

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  12. Jingle - Thnak you; it's good to try a new one.

    Mike & Chris - Thanks very much! Cheers.

    Andy - :o) Thanks; it's a good word!

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  13. Great imagery in your words. Perfect for this prompt!

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  14. "Primordial fear" I love that line! Fantastic haiku

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