Erratic Lightening
a luminous omen of
primordial fear
This is my first submission 3 Word Wednesday whose words this week are Erratic, Lumionus and Omen. Just for fun I tried to us as few other words as I could, thus the Haiku. Click on the title to go there.
a haiku is a lovely way to use to the words. you did well. glad you have you joining us.
ReplyDeletePowerful and consise in the best spirit of haiku!
ReplyDeleteYou linked the words beautifully.
ReplyDeletethe way you captured this is wonderful
ReplyDeleteI liked your poem greatly. We live in the same state you know, so I identify with this lightnihg. Like you, I wrote a short poem, darker than yours, I think.
ReplyDeleteYou certainly don't need any more words than those..they slice through like a lightening bolt..have you not been on TWW before..it's good to see you! Jae
ReplyDeleteJessica - thank you!
ReplyDeleteStafford & Rinkly - Thanks, good to 'see' you again.
FNDBWLW - thanks!
Mary - I didn't know you are from WI! Cool. I'll have a look at yours.
Jae - This was my first TWW. I've seen it before but never participated. Thanks for your comment :o)
ReplyDeleteyou packed three words in a Haiku.
ReplyDeleteexcellent job.
Glad to see you write for more challenges.
You nailed it with a perfect haiku. Pretty darn great for a first attempt.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Mike, brilliant Haiku with those three words. Cheers.
ReplyDeleteCool bananas, I love that word 'primordial'.
ReplyDeleteJingle - Thnak you; it's good to try a new one.
ReplyDeleteMike & Chris - Thanks very much! Cheers.
Andy - :o) Thanks; it's a good word!
Great imagery in your words. Perfect for this prompt!
ReplyDeleteHey Ginny - thanks!
ReplyDelete"Primordial fear" I love that line! Fantastic haiku
ReplyDeleteThank you MindOM! :o)
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