Image: Object to be Destroyed by Man Ray
Object
to be Destroyed
keeps watch over me with
disdain as I practice my scales.
I never did like piano lessons
in that room that smelled of cabbage.
So go on, destroy it;
you know I won’t
object.
Here's another take on the image:
Tick,tick, tock
scolded by the clock
I never could keep time…
And then I got long-winded:
Tick, tick, tock
scolded by the clock
I never could keep time…
Keep it, spend it,
measure it, treasure it
race it and chase it,
but never erase time.
If I could
I woul leave,
lose my
place
in this
line of time -
coil my time line
like a lasso
and tie it in a lovely knot.
Then my 70-year-old self
could remind the 7-year-old
to floss and study hard,
and 26-year-old me can
reassure me-at-13
that Jeanette is only a mean girl,
and not really important.
And just perhaps, 14-year-old me
could remind the 41-year-old
to lighten up and have some fun.
But, tie as I might,
the knots won’t hold;
my time line
is cut into snippets
by clocks and calendars.
Tick - there goes another golden moment
tick – and another,
tock…
Thank you for taking the TIME to read this and thanks to Tess Kincaid for this prompt at The Mag.
This is great! I can relate to the desire to destroy a metronome. I never liked them either.
ReplyDeleteAnd your long poem is very thoughtful.
Thank you Sliver.
DeleteSo many facets of you... very nice.
ReplyDeleteThanks ReBelle, I couldn't come up with anything at first, then all at once...
DeleteYes, never erase time...thanks for the reminder...very glad you became"long-winded"..terrific!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Lyn. :o)
DeleteThe long winded you
ReplyDeleteWas a great read to come due
But all were grand
Here in your land
Hey thanks Pat, I appreciate that!
DeleteI loved all three takes on the prompt, but the last, long-winded one was my favorite!
ReplyDeleteHey thanks Misfit! I almost didn't include that one. Now I'm glad I did. Cheers!
ReplyDeletenice take on the prompt indeed....thanks for sharing this
ReplyDeleteThank you Wayne - thanks for reading and commenting!
Delete3 very entertaining reads. Thanks, Mary.
ReplyDeleteThank you Doctor!
Deletecoil my time line
ReplyDeletelike a lasso
and tie it in a lovely knot....so your older self could talk to your younger self...that is really cool....
Thanks Brian :o)
DeleteAversion to a metronome, a common syndrome. :-)
ReplyDeleteThere are some guilty piano teachers out there!
DeleteLove these Mary.....I wish we all could tie a knot and go back to give a little advice to our younger selves.
ReplyDeleteThanks Carrie...and remember to take advice from our younger selves too! ;-)
DeleteYes ~~ a Magpie Trifecta! So well done........
ReplyDeleteAw thanks Helen!
ReplyDeleteLove the way this made you think - a coiled lasso sounds a great idea - think I'll join that club. :)
ReplyDeleteYeee ha Jinksy! Thanks!
ReplyDeleteTakes me straight back to my old piano lesson days...only mine didn't smell of cabbage...
ReplyDelete:o) Lucky you!
ReplyDeleteBravo , time traveller, very ether- real !
ReplyDeleteHahaha - excellent! Thanks.
ReplyDeleteTime can be a very hungry ghost. ~Mary
ReplyDeleteYou're right, of course, Mary.
DeleteWonderful images. Time is the great deceiver.
ReplyDeleteFlash 55 - Wanted: Dead or Alive?
Thank you Nessa.
DeleteI don't think music and cabbage go together, so I don't blame you. I really like the long poem. Well done!
ReplyDeleteThanks very much ~T~
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