Monday, December 3, 2012

About Time




















Image: Object to be Destroyed by Man Ray

Object
to be Destroyed
keeps watch over me with
disdain as I practice my scales.
I never did like piano lessons
in that room that smelled of cabbage.
So go on, destroy it;
you know I won’t
object.


Here's another take on the image:


Tick,tick, tock
scolded by the clock
I never could keep time…


And then I got long-winded:


Tick, tick, tock
scolded by the clock
I never could keep time…

Keep it, spend it,
measure it, treasure it
race it and chase it,
but never erase time.

If I could
I woul leave,
lose my place
in this line of time -
coil my time line
like a lasso
and tie it in a lovely knot.

Then my 70-year-old self
could remind the 7-year-old
to floss and study hard,
and 26-year-old me can
reassure me-at-13
that Jeanette is only a mean girl,
and not really important.
And just perhaps, 14-year-old me
could remind the 41-year-old
to lighten up and have some fun.

But, tie as I might,
the knots won’t hold;
my time line
is cut into snippets
by clocks and calendars.
Tick - there goes another golden moment
tick – and another,
tock…


Thank you for taking the TIME to read this and thanks to Tess Kincaid for this prompt at The Mag.  


34 comments:

  1. This is great! I can relate to the desire to destroy a metronome. I never liked them either.
    And your long poem is very thoughtful.

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  2. So many facets of you... very nice.

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    1. Thanks ReBelle, I couldn't come up with anything at first, then all at once...

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  3. Yes, never erase time...thanks for the reminder...very glad you became"long-winded"..terrific!!

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  4. The long winded you
    Was a great read to come due
    But all were grand
    Here in your land

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  5. I loved all three takes on the prompt, but the last, long-winded one was my favorite!

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  6. Hey thanks Misfit! I almost didn't include that one. Now I'm glad I did. Cheers!

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  7. nice take on the prompt indeed....thanks for sharing this

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    1. Thank you Wayne - thanks for reading and commenting!

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  8. 3 very entertaining reads. Thanks, Mary.

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  9. coil my time line
    like a lasso
    and tie it in a lovely knot....so your older self could talk to your younger self...that is really cool....

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  10. Aversion to a metronome, a common syndrome. :-)

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    1. There are some guilty piano teachers out there!

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  11. Love these Mary.....I wish we all could tie a knot and go back to give a little advice to our younger selves.

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    1. Thanks Carrie...and remember to take advice from our younger selves too! ;-)

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  12. Yes ~~ a Magpie Trifecta! So well done........

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  13. Love the way this made you think - a coiled lasso sounds a great idea - think I'll join that club. :)

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  14. Takes me straight back to my old piano lesson days...only mine didn't smell of cabbage...

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  15. Bravo , time traveller, very ether- real !

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  16. Time can be a very hungry ghost. ~Mary

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  17. I don't think music and cabbage go together, so I don't blame you. I really like the long poem. Well done!

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