There's something about poetry that saves me… ~ Martin Espada
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love it! love it love it love it. Oh the juxtaposition and mystery of the ocean! how well you capture it. Depth and simplicity: that cryptic combination speaks not only of the ocean but of your piece here. well done!
Oh how I love this so very much.
As long as you give the cat some water wings, he'll go deep
Mary - that's swell!
ha. it is often what is beneath the surface...and below what glitters that is most important as well...smiles.
An excellent metaphor.
And deep? This is a great use of repetition, Mary. (No, not that Mary, the Other Mary.)
I would love receiving this poem from someone.I guess that means I like it!=)
Skin deep...oh, this is so much more...lovely...
You capture the ocean with these well chosen words. I have begun to write poetry recently.
Unfathomable deep. This flows over...
Sounds as though a life lived well, and a love that runs on forever more!
Thank you all for reading and commenting. I've visited your blogs and read your lovely work too! Cheers!
Deep and deep- indeed! I enjoyed this- thanks Mary!
A lovely, lovely, lovely from me too. It is lovely!Anna :o]
This was unexpected and profound. Loved this.
Excellent, Mary :)
Not fickle the sea, she is infinite. I always enjoy brief to the point poems :)
Innovative, imaginative, perceptive...
Thank you all - I have been reading and commenting on your pieces as well!
I just happened upon this one, Mary. Your words are simple and beautiful, like the photo. I particularly like the repeat at the end.
Deep, and profound!
You say it all