Do you remember when we spoke
in the language of gods;
in the old tongue,
tender and true?
Whisper to me, again,
of your days and nights,
of fruit ripening in the sun.
Tell me the secrets of the stars.
Hold me in your song;
swing me on a promise.
Teach me, again, to hope.
This is a gorgeous poem.. one to please the senses and the intellect at the same time.
ReplyDeleteThis is a gorgeous poem.. one to please the senses and the intellect at the same time.
ReplyDeleteAgree with Kerry--the language of the gods that we borrow for our most important speeches, poetic and otherwise, well displayed here, Mary.
ReplyDeleteI love this. brilliant. I love every single bit of the way it flows together. it was a pleasure to read and re-read
ReplyDeleteYou have the unique ability to make me 'sink' into your poetry .. a huge sigh for this one!
ReplyDeleteA huge sigh for me as well...
ReplyDeleteOh, and your poetry Rocks too!
Mary Bach, you are one of my Faves
Loved your Heavenly 55
Thanks for playing, thanks for your staunch loyalty
Have a Kick Ass Week-End
Excellent. I love the way this moves.
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Very relevant poem, Mary.... We all need to feel that we really have found a way to communicate with God or the gods, I think.
ReplyDeleteSuch language has fallen away, except when one wants something at their bay haha
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, Mary. Poignant an perfect last line. Hope to hang our hearts on. Loved this.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, Mary . I love it.
ReplyDeleteThis was indeed heavenly !! I'm lovin' it !!!
ReplyDeleteheartfelt prayer to lord
ReplyDeleteHeavenly -- but there is something very sensual here too. Wanting to go back to basics - what is important and start again - very well conveyed. Thanks Mary. K.
ReplyDeletemmm this touches an old magic...i like how you gave it that, the language of the gods....can we get back there is the deep question
ReplyDeleteOh, beautiful. Times change, roles change, getting back to the sense of wonder is a marvelous goal.
ReplyDeleteGorgeous view!
ReplyDeleteI love these lines:
" Hold me in your song;
swing me on a promise."
Wondrous :D
swooning, swaying, sighing. This is stunning!
ReplyDeleteThank you all so much! :-D I've visited, read and commented on all your lovely poetry as well.
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