Sun bids a lavish good bye, and
l-i-n-g-e-r-i-n-g
paints the entire sky.
In her wake, trailing dusk,
I scatter dreamseeds,
germ and husk,
that bloom into stars over your head.
Now close your eyes,
go to bed.
I’ll wait for you in the curve of the moon,
so let sleep carry you
back to me soon.
This si for G-man's FF55. Click on the link and check it out!
Mary Bach....
ReplyDeleteWhat a Romantic.
This one makes MY heart skip a beat.
What a poetic genius you are.
Loved your Celestial 55
Thanks for another Masterpiece of Lingering Love
Have a Kick Ass Week-End
I just love to EUCHRE you...:-)
ReplyDeleteLovely! Guaranteed to bring sweet dreams.
Delete:) enchanting love
ReplyDeleteOy, such gorgeousness! Loved every drop of this.
ReplyDeleteSure one would want to sleep to return to such a keep
ReplyDeleteThis is so beautiful!
ReplyDeleteSweet, gentle, and romantic. The words flow so nicely.
ReplyDeleteCurve of the moon, very romantic ~
ReplyDeleteMary, this was so beautiful and tender! Loved it!
ReplyDeleteoh how lovely - like a lullaby but so much more colourful... and very peaceful
ReplyDeleteThis is nice. I like the idea of meeting at the curve of the moon. I liked the rhythm also.
ReplyDeletei scatter dream seeds and wait for you in the corner of the moon...ah now that is just a bit of magic...lovely mary....
ReplyDeleteIt's like a little dream romance, but a little sad, too. Together, parting, then hopefully together again.
ReplyDeleteSuch a romantic tale; I shall try to catch some of the dream seed tonight.
ReplyDeleteLove your blog, am following.
That was just lovely!
ReplyDeleteMadeleine Begun Kane
Such a sweet lullaby.
ReplyDeleteHi Mary, finally found the time to get here, as promised and really glad I did.. What a wonderfully tender and soothing piece... Great writing - I shall be back for more soon.. I'm just only sorry it's not quite bedtime yet and I can't just curl up and drift away on your words... With Best Wishes to you Scott www.scotthastie.com p.s like the look of your blog too....
ReplyDeleteMary, a magical poem :)
ReplyDeleteThank you all. I'm so glad you took the time to come read and leave a comment. Rest assured I'll do the same for you.
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