Sunday, March 9, 2014

Abandoned

     Lee Plaza Hotel, Detroit by Bonnie Beechler

Why do you leave me
like this when you know housekeeping
is not my strong suit?


Check out The Mag for more responses, or add your own, to the prompt by the lovely Tess Kincaid.
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38 comments:

  1. UnknownMarch 9, 2014 at 1:31 PM

    Short and fun , no one likes housekeeping.
    When i saw the first line i thought it was going to be a sad poem but the you surprised me.

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  2. kaykualaMarch 9, 2014 at 1:44 PM

    Chuckles! We can certainly do with some humor Mary!

    Hank

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  3. LeoviMarch 9, 2014 at 2:33 PM

    Yes, I think that is not my strong point!

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  4. Kathe W.March 9, 2014 at 3:58 PM

    oh dear- hire a house cleaner! Easier than replacing a sweetheart!
    (my poem is also about housekeeping!)

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  5. Brian MillerMarch 9, 2014 at 4:12 PM

    ouch...
    not only leaving
    but leaving
    a mess

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  6. Doctor FTSEMarch 9, 2014 at 4:32 PM

    So you got so hacked off with housework you trashed the whole room? Brilliant.

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  7. ayalaMarch 9, 2014 at 6:47 PM

    Left the mess.... :)

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  8. humbirdMarch 9, 2014 at 7:20 PM

    turn music on and debris will gone in no time :)

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  9. WayneMarch 10, 2014 at 12:33 AM

    Nicely done.....thanks for sharing

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  10. Silent Otto March 10, 2014 at 6:56 AM

    Clearly your talents lie in other directions, OM !

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  11. MaryMarch 10, 2014 at 10:58 AM

    NIce one!

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  12. Pat HattMarch 10, 2014 at 8:44 PM

    Better off burning it down than cleaning up lol

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  13. Vandana SharmaMarch 10, 2014 at 11:00 PM

    sometimes its better to take a break!!

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  14. 21 WitsMarch 11, 2014 at 6:18 AM

    I fear it's not his strong suit as well!

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  15. HelenMarch 11, 2014 at 12:35 PM

    Short, sweet, to the point ~~~ great poetry does not have to be long, involved.

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  16. Cait O'ConnorMarch 12, 2014 at 12:49 PM

    Genius!

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  17. Tess KincaidMarch 12, 2014 at 2:43 PM

    Or mine!

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    1. Other MaryMarch 24, 2014 at 10:30 AM

      Only the boring have perfectly clean houses? Let's go with that! And thanks for the prompt. :o)

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  18. HelenaMarch 13, 2014 at 9:00 AM

    heh heh heh.....crumby love - I like it!!

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  19. ~T~March 14, 2014 at 12:57 PM

    Time to move!

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  20. FrikoMarch 15, 2014 at 1:40 PM

    short and sweet; not a grain of sentiment, which is all for the good.

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  21. Yvonne OsborneMarch 16, 2014 at 5:22 PM

    Ha!

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  22. AnonymousMarch 22, 2014 at 12:14 AM

    damn... perfectly composed to the prompt... ~

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