Inspire Wings by Ella of Ella's Edge
There is a place
no steel-tongue, stone-eyed
traps are set
no barbed-wire boundaries strung
nor poisoned pans
laid out
there is a place,
a compass-cornered alcove,
where grey wind goes
as it rushes past
there is a place
in star-crooned skies
the moon resides
with all her lovely faces
there is a place
the waters gather
to listen to the sirens sing
in deep-chambered blues
there is a place
behind dream-kissed eyes,
each night,
I slip the leash
This is for the Sunday mini-challenge over in the garden at IGRT. Click on the link and check it out. We were instructed to write about our inner wild woman, and I didn't really do that. Instead I ended up writing about these lovely, wild havens. Oh well.... And, I should add I've also tried my hand at kenning (creating a new word by combining existing words...sort of), which Bjorn Rudberg explains so well at dVerse. Once again I am too slow to link up, but you should still check it out anyway. Besides his interesting and thorough explanation you'll find some brilliant poems.
A place that would be fun to view indeed
ReplyDeleteHeehee - thanks Pat.
DeleteWild is wild is wild .. lovely poem, Mary! (darn it, I can be sedate when I try)
ReplyDeleteIt is! Thanks Helen. (And you're not SUPPOSED to be sedate! You rock!)
DeleteThank you Gail.
ReplyDeleteBehind dream kissed eyes... among other lines throughout, your words have a magical lens to them.
ReplyDeleteThanks Karen. :o)
Deletei like your kennings in this as well mary...its a cool build all the way through...love that even the water listens in that next to last stanza...and that you can slip the leash to find it...though that you have to is a bit disconcerting....
ReplyDeleteThanks Brian. I should add something about the dVerse kennings, because I read that and ruminated over it, but wasn't in time to link up. That did def influcence my word choice (or world building) in this. And, don't be too disconcerted, I really had something in mind that was much less drastic than this ended up sounding, but I like the the way it reads. Lol, that's why I don't write biographies. ;-)
DeleteA great poem, Mary. I love it.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ayala. Glad you stopped by.
DeleteWould love ti visit such place
ReplyDeleteThanks Vandana!
DeleteOh man I would love to visit such a wonderful sounding place.
ReplyDeleteThank you Lilith - I hope you find it!
DeleteLovely! A great blog.
ReplyDelete(ツ) from Cottage Country Ontario , ON, Canada!
Well Mary, I'm not so sure about the muse leaving you a bit! This most recent piece is especially terrific - written with great poise and stimulating clarity - "each night, I slip the leash" - Lovely! With Best Wishes Scott www.scothastie.com
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Scott! All the best to you too. :o)
DeleteI enjoyed reading about your wild haven, Mary! Great use of kennings. I particularly like those in the two closing stanzas.
ReplyDeleteThank you Gabriella. :o)
Deletethe repetition works well, to return (and return) us to that place ~
ReplyDeleteThanks M.
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