Blue and purple cliffs
reach out for heaven; instead
clouds slip through their grasp
New York’s central park:
oasis surrounded by
a concrete wasteland
Life in blues, shimmers
just under the surface of
a grey existance
'In Tandem' at Alias Jinksy has this writing prompt. Click on the title to see it for your self! This is my first visit time participating - thanks Jinksy!
Oh, I like all three of these haiku - well done! I hope you play again:-)
ReplyDeleteI find Haiku a bit restrictive, but yours here are very worthy. With Jabblog, I hope you will play again. And thank you for your comment on mine.
ReplyDeleteI love haiku, and I love yours - especially the last one. Thanks for playing!
ReplyDeleteJabblog - Thanks; I stumbled upon this by happy accident. I will play again! :o)
ReplyDeleteDoctor - Sometimes restrictions are a good thing. Thanks, and you're welcome.
Jinksy - Thank you. The third is my fav too.
Very nicely played
ReplyDeleteYou do haiku's really well
I'm odd and like the second the best I must tell
But you know I'm odd any way
So that causes no dismay..haha
Your Haiku interpretations are a delight to read. They offer a bit of freedom to discuss the graphic from three points of view, yet are related.
ReplyDeleteJust delightful! I love your Haiku Mary. xx
ReplyDeleteHi Other Mary,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed all three of your haiku and previous posts weren't bad either.
Thanks for visiting my blog. I shall be back. (no pun intended)
All three are wonderful and do fit Jinksy's painting beautifully. Amazing really, that one painting can ignite so many ideas ;-)
ReplyDeletePat - Thanks, you are unique, glad you like #2!
ReplyDeleteAnn - Thank you, glad you stopped by.
June - Thanks so much.
Friko - I appreciate your reading and commenting, thanks!
Carolina - Thank you; I agree it was a wonderful writing prompt.