Softly raindrops fall
soaking me through to the skin,
each one a blessing.
soaking me through to the skin,
each one a blessing.
This is my first time linking to d'verse Poets' Pub, Poetics by Sheila Moore for their prompt 'water.' Click on the title to go to the Pub.
Mary, welcome to the Pub. A lovely first offering, both the photo and the verse. Soaked through with blessings from above. What a wonderful thought ...
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nice...simple and feels so good...i love the rain...
ReplyDeleteAs long as it's not winter and cold
ReplyDeleteI agree with the tale you told..haha
nice haiku...thanks for linking ~
ReplyDeletenice to meet you~
beautiful Haiku.
ReplyDeletethe rain imagery is romantic feel.
yes, each one is a blessing, so many but all needed to have a lasting effect on life. just lovely, mary. Thank you :)
ReplyDeleteThanks everyone - it's a blessing to be here.
ReplyDeleteSimply beautiful!
ReplyDeleteHi Mary
ReplyDeleteGood to see you at the bar.
I love your piece
My admiration for this style is boundless.
I find subtle and exact hard to do - im working on it!
To pack so much power into so few words - its a real skill.
The pick is great to- a perfect match.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
Deborah - Thank you, I rolled reading your piece about the tooth!
ReplyDeleteTom - Thanks so much. I found your work impressive and potent. Thanks for following!
beautiful haiku. how simple words can bring a powerful meaning.
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