Sunday, July 31, 2011

Quench


Softly raindrops fall
soaking me through to the skin,
each one a blessing.

This is my first time linking to d'verse Poets' Pub, Poetics by Sheila Moore for their prompt 'water.'  Click on the title to go to the Pub.



11 comments:

  1. Mary, welcome to the Pub. A lovely first offering, both the photo and the verse. Soaked through with blessings from above. What a wonderful thought ...

    David

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  2. nice...simple and feels so good...i love the rain...

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  3. As long as it's not winter and cold
    I agree with the tale you told..haha

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  4. nice haiku...thanks for linking ~

    nice to meet you~

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  5. beautiful Haiku.

    the rain imagery is romantic feel.

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  6. yes, each one is a blessing, so many but all needed to have a lasting effect on life. just lovely, mary. Thank you :)

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  7. Thanks everyone - it's a blessing to be here.

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  8. Hi Mary

    Good to see you at the bar.

    I love your piece

    My admiration for this style is boundless.

    I find subtle and exact hard to do - im working on it!
    To pack so much power into so few words - its a real skill.
    The pick is great to- a perfect match.
    I look forward to reading more of your work.

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  9. Deborah - Thank you, I rolled reading your piece about the tooth!

    Tom - Thanks so much. I found your work impressive and potent. Thanks for following!

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  10. beautiful haiku. how simple words can bring a powerful meaning.

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