Where will it take you?
That is my first response to the wonderful picture with the movie prompt at the IGRT posted by Ella. Just imagine - a ticket to admit one. If you could use it to go anywhere...anywhen...where, when and to what will you choose to go?
Then, after thinking about it, I came up with a much more depressing response:
I only
go to tear-jerkers
so after
credits roll
and house lights come on
my obvious weeping is
unremarkable
This is a Shadorma + a poetry form which contains the following number of syllable per line: 3/5/3/3/7/5 (standard) + and extra 3 syllable line, just ...because :o)
Image by Nelson Marques
I'd go to a bank at night and use it to walk right in and take all the money and walk right out...lol....see helped be less depressing.
ReplyDeleteHeeheehee - so you will be a fat cat then!
ReplyDeleteLike crying in the rain.
ReplyDeleteOh me too. I love a movie that makes me cry!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteSometimes it's easier to cry over other people's drama than one's own.
ReplyDeleteYou have hit in a truth in this piece.
I like crying in the movies ~
ReplyDeleteWe need tear jerkers they remind us how fortunate we are, sometime
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely right Ella!
DeleteSo sad. It's a beautiful poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you Teresa. (by the way, I don't really only go to sad movies and weep all the time)
DeleteSubtle, simple and just brilliantly written ... ooh you are good! :o)
ReplyDeleteThanks Deborah - you have outstanding taste! lol, all joking aside though, I appreciate your kind words.
DeleteOh, I know what you mean, except that I don't go knowingly to tear-jerkers (animal movies, especially). Nice, simple format. So well said. I'll have to try this shadorma.
ReplyDeleteThanks Mary Ann - Glad you stopped by. Since you said you want to try a Shadorma, I'll mention the true Shadorma is the standard 3/5/3/3/7/5 I just added the extra line because I'm a bit lysdexic, and once I realized my mistake that last line (word) was too important to the piece to just omit, lol.
ReplyDeleteLove the form. Sometimes I like to do that too.
ReplyDeleteThanks Loalmouse!
DeleteI love this poem. I am such a weeper, even when movies aren't tear-jerkers. I weep at diaper commercials. So I can really relate, even if it's just a poem and you don't exactly mean it.
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Thanks Kay, you're a great follower and poet!
Deleteoh yes, i totally know, yes yes. oh yes. get it out, sister. lately i have been crying in EVERY movie!
ReplyDeletealso, i dig the shadorma. i've written a ton of them, they get under my skin, like the cinquain.
if you ever wanna shadorma spar, or talk shadorma, gimme a shout!
I hate it when the lights come on. Couldn't they just let us exit in the dark? I love poetry in form. Good job. No, beautiful job!
ReplyDeleteI couldn't find any songs here Mary Bach...
ReplyDeleteBut I loved your Shadorma
See you next week?
Have a Kick Ass Week-End anyway...G
I tried sending you another link. Hope you have a great weekend too!
DeleteI like tearjerkers too...well done!
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