Will
you be
my true knight,
bright though rusted;
brave as a tiger,
one I’ve always trusted
to save me from my nightmares
with your own prancing, dancing tongue?
Hold me tight and kiss away my cares.
Will you be my true knight, bright though rusted?
There's a nice, romantic-ish poem for Valentine's Day for all you old school romantics out there. The form is a Dectina Refrain created by Marion Friedenthal, with each line containing the following number of syllables: 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9 and the refrain repeats lines 1-4. Go to the Imaginary Garden with Real Toads to see other love poem that don't use the word 'love' in them. This next one doesn't fit the bill, but it's just for fun. Those of you with a slightly more twisted and humorous view of the day, this one is for you:
My Love
My love is like a red, red truck,
All he wants to do is...
drive around
C'mon, what did ya think I was gonna say?
Image by magnoliamerryweather.tumblr.com
LOL well vulgar is fun too and a rhyme could have come due too..haha But funny none the less.
ReplyDeleteThanks Pat, glad you got a laugh :o)
DeleteLol not vulgar at all ;) cute .
ReplyDeleteHappy Valentine's day. I haven't checked in for a while. I love your blog!
ReplyDeletei find it cute too... happy valentines!
ReplyDeleteJJRod'z
nice job, the second piece was funny, the first piece I like how that form worked out, very nice write. Thanks
ReplyDeleteThanks Fred. Do you have a blog?
DeleteI just love your romanticish Quixoticish poem, and the red truck made me laugh and laugh, Mary.
ReplyDeleteFun for me, because I saved the page so I'd have the Dectina Refrain form on file, and the red truck is a bonus when I need a giggle.
K
Thanks Kay :o) Yes, those windmills need to be tilted at! And glad you got a laugh too. lol
DeleteLove your take on the image... we should all find such a knight!
ReplyDeleteWouldn't that be grand? Than you Kim!
Deleteoooh i am curious about that form! and uh, yeah i wanna drive around, too.
ReplyDeleteGood one Marian. I think we all need some driving in our lives, lol. It does give a whole new meaning to the term 'Sunday driver' though. (giggle)
DeleteI have a knight he showed up in a white jeep instead of a white horse, lol! I love all the imagery you shared!
ReplyDeleteThe red truck was fun to read....
Happy Valentine's Day~
Ella - a knight in a jeep is terrific! Good for you! Thanks, and happy Valentine's Day to you as well!
DeleteI love that first poem!
ReplyDeletethanks Mama Zen!
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DeleteHi Mary,
ReplyDeleteI loved both of these. In the second I thought you might say ...
Park!
Heeheehee - very good!
Delete"Will you be my true knight, bright though rusted?" I qualify on both counts. So how do I apply?
ReplyDeleteDoctor, the job is yours! :o)
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