Friday, January 4, 2013

A Flutter of Thoughts

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with brain a-buzz
around a central thought,
like a lovely cloud of moths
that never lite,
the maybe-haze obscures certainty,
clarity,
conclusion

there is no focus
to the flutter of if’s;
one cannot settle...
grasp… possess… know

but in the unknowing
lies the possibility
of infinite possibilities,
and this is where our minds can dance

This is for G-man at FF55 where you can go to read 55 word gems.

16 comments:

  1. I love, "like a lovely cloud of moths that never lite". Very focused, your poems and wit.

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  2. Like unknowing as you ay many things can be thought of and hope to be true.

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  3. maybes and ifs will def rob you of opportunity...there comes a time we have to move regardless and trust we will be caught...

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    1. Ah, I wasn't even thinking along those lines.

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  4. This is really good, Mary. So many excellent lines-especially like 'maybe-haze' and 'flutter of ifs,' and the ending is perfect.

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    1. Thank you Joy. I always appreciate your comments.

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  5. Oh yeah baby, you been hittin the left over Holiday Cheer I see.
    I get those same Mothy Clouds!!!
    It's so nice to see you back Bach.
    You know whenever you contribute to the Friday Funfest, I get to fluttering also.
    Loved your always classy 55 Mary.
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  6. Hahaha - are you telling me that's all from the holiday spirit(s)? Thanks Galen, and thank you for hosting the weekly 55 for all of us loyal followers :o)

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  7. there is no focus
    to the flutter of if’s;

    But that is where creativity starts? :) Loved this (and the hair do)

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