Tuesday, January 22, 2013

Fascination


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With shrewd, well-reasoned calculation
She thrust her hips in syncopation
inviting full participation.
His ill-concealed anticipation
was causing painful consternation
from her outrageous instigation.

Just a little fun with word-play.

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  1. You did have fun didn't you... wonderful wordplay almost a tongue twister. Much enjoyed!

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    1. Yes, this one was just for fun - glad you enjoyed it too!

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  2. haha...a tongue twister is what i thought as well...it is fun word play....nice mary...sounds like they are having a bit of fun as well...smiles.

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    1. That's right Brian, can't be all serious and full of doom and gloom ALL the time, lol. Thanks.

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  3. twisting my tongue around to day, payback is it? haha fun write.

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  4. How fun. And I can just see to lovers in a playful romp.

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    1. Thanks Jessica, yea...just a playful little ditty.

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  5. A great little bit of word play. Very Mae West of you!

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  6. hahahaha! she sounds like she can easily cause fascination.

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    2. Heehee - Another verse perhaps?

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  7. A lot of fun with wordplay! This is fun to read especially out loud. Bravo!

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    1. Thanks Beth, I was just sort of goofing around, and surprised myself with just how many words rhyme with calculation!

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