Old, cold words
drawn from a deep well,
still yet vital,
holding
elemental forces;
Bonded, bound,
with a power to move beyond
mere naming.
Dark, shining, infinite
from a place
too deep
for pain or loss or time;
Old, cold words
drawn from a deep well,
still yet vital.
Our only hope.
Written for G-man and his FF55 where he gives us 55 words of goodness and asks for ours back. Check it out.
Mary Bach...
ReplyDeleteIs this referring to things brought up from the DEEP past during an argument, that is better off left unsaid?
Or does it go even deeper than that?
Loved your enigmatic 55
Thanks for playing, your stories are always so beautifully intriguing, much like Mary Bach.
Have a Kick Ass Week-End
EUCHRE!!!!!!
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DeleteThanks Galen :o) I've been haunted with those first two lines for a long time. I don't really know what to make of them. Hope you have a great weekend too!
ReplyDeleteWell, the power to move beyond naming always boosts productivity. The whiteboard is great, but once we get beyond it, the real things get done. ~Mary
ReplyDeleteAh, never thought if it in terms of productivity.
Deleteour words are all we have...wrote a piece for tomorrow dealing with how hard it is t times to use them...and they are the way out most often....
ReplyDeleteThat's right, if we don't use them we have nothing.
DeleteSometimes words can be rough to use and find, but they have to come out.
ReplyDeleteYup, and those words are powerful.
DeleteSometimes I wish I chunk my damned words back into a deep well and drown them
ReplyDeleteOh dear! Though, I know what you mean...
DeleteOur words is all we have...lovely write, Mary.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ayala. <3
DeleteYou paint an inspiring picture with your words.
ReplyDeleteThank you Alice.
Deletewords DO have power, don't they! fabulous 55, Mary!
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Thank you very much!
DeleteI just watched Scary Movie 3, where the creepy chick comes out of a well, soooo I'm expecting either a shock or a stupid joke, and I don't think either is coming!
ReplyDeleteDarn, I'd really like to hear that stupid joke!
DeleteThe image is powerful, Mary--it really is a bit creepy as well, sinister, perhaps is a better word, hinting at the power of the hidden--and that's one of the greatest powers. Old words can leave big scars.
ReplyDeleteYou know I was not starting out to write about something negative, but it sure took a turn that way. Thanks Joy.
DeleteSounds to me like something someone once said that never settled or was never forgotten. Very haunting!
ReplyDeleteThanks Margaret. Guess I'm excivating...
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