There's something about poetry that saves me… ~ Martin Espada
smiles. nice write...i think i could dance as well....i like the unexpected....
Me 2 Brian. I was quite surprised that she...danced.
Hey you guys! Read down to that little delight entitled 'Love' and you will see "And we are left,/ Wondering where to hide the bodies" the couple 'hid the bodies' away from prying eyes!Must have been good to prompt a return for a celebratory dance!
She danced?? Well, good for her! Love that surprise ending!www.angiemuresan.com
Very nicely constructed. The sudden undercutting of expectation in the last two-word verse is beautifully handled.
Thank you all (and, um...I don't really have any bodies to hide, just the usual skeletons in the closet :o)
I simply love this Mag. Great take on the prompt. Love and Light, Sender
Red dress romps are the best revenge :)
I love short red dress vs long red hair. Nice piece. Welcome to Magpie!
Thank you all!
thanks Stafford for pointing out the following piece...whew dance of glee in a grave yard huh? Wow.
dancing on a tombstone? :-osurprise ending... well done..My Magpie
A dance to die for!!
Hahaha - I like that Tumblewords!
your description is so vivid and live..masterful magpie!
I signed in to follow your blog,will place your link in our blog roll within 7 days.Hope to see you in out week 9 potluck.cheers.u rock!xxx
Thank you Jingle!