I am the smooth surface of a pond
reflecting your image back to you.
I am the darkness
around the
stars in the night sky;
I am what you cannot see.
I am a pebble resting in a deep pocket,
smooth and inscrutable.
I am what remains.
I am other.
For G-man's FF55.
The other is cool
ReplyDeleteThe other sure does rule
The other is grand
Now back to my litterbox sand
lol, I can dig that! Thanks for the read Pat!
DeleteLovely.
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Thanks Anna.
DeleteYou a cool, mysterious, and alluring. I am other.
ReplyDeleteThank you AA, glad it worked.
DeleteThis was just wonderful -
ReplyDeleteI am the darkness
around the stars in the night sky;
I am what you cannot see.
Excellent.
Thank you!
DeleteYou are the Brilliance shouting at me every Friday.
ReplyDeleteYou are the poetic beauty I wished I possessed.
You are Mary Bach....Nuff Said.
Loved your 55
Thanks for playing, thanks for always providing Top Notch entertainment, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
Thank you G-man!!! :o)
DeleteVery Zen!
ReplyDeleteLove it!
Thank you all...so much. I've read all your 55's and commented as well. :o)
ReplyDeleteInspiring take...I love it ~
ReplyDeleteHappy Friday ~
Thank you Heaven - happy Saturday (I'm a bit behind!)
Deletenice...there is a cool mysticism to this....very cool 55 mary....
ReplyDeleteHey Brian, I appreciate you stopping by...you are one busy blogger. Cheers!
DeleteI am other...love that. I agree there is a mystical feel to this.
ReplyDeleteThanks Susie. :o)
DeleteI had a friend who was other...this reminded me of him. I miss him but I really enjoyed this!
ReplyDeleteThank you Charlie...sorry about your friend.
DeleteYou certainly are "Other" as indicated by your name. I celebrate your otherness. I want to wrap myself in your otherness. I want to immerse myself in your otherness. I am your "other" from another mother!
ReplyDeleteThank you Timoteo, welcome to the 'Other' side! And I'm old enough for the 'another mother' to remind me of an album by Dan Fogelberg, Twin Sons of Different Mothers. A happy memory for me :o)
ReplyDeleteThank you Melissa. I'm glad you stopped by and left a comment.
ReplyDeleteHow wonderfully mysterious! Very intriguing; makes me wonder what your inspiration was. Here's mine: New Deal
ReplyDeleteThank you Linc!
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