Image: Charis, Lake Ediza, California, 1937 by Edward Weston
Take me as I am
unrefined and unretouched;
not a vessel to hold
your feelings,
or a mirror
to reflect
yourself back
to you.
Do not oppress me with your
need for perfection.
Accept my beautiful scars
and creases.
They are me.
Do not superimpose
your romantic notions on me,
but see me as I am:
brave, sharp, focused.
I will not flee;
I will not fly into the sun.
I am here.
Written for The Mag where Tess Kincaid provides a weekly writing prompt. I highly recommend it.
Notes: f/64 was a group of American photographers, including Weston, who usually set their lenses to that aperture to secure maximum image sharpness in the foreground and distance. In 1934 Weston resolved to make only unretouched portraits. This was taken in 1937, the same year Amelia Earhart disappeared.
Excellent reflections in this.
ReplyDeleteI love that your 'voice' supplied the words for which I searched ! LOL
ReplyDeleteWe are a good pair Jinksy :o)
DeleteAwesome! We both saw strenth. I'm sure that is what the photographer saw too.
ReplyDeleteThanks Gail. And I agree with you.
DeleteThanks - I think so too!
ReplyDeletethis is wonderful...i love the feeling behind it...just take me as i am, not because you need me to fill a role but...
ReplyDeleteThank you Brian - glad you stopped by. :o)
DeleteLove it. A woman who is her own person and will not be put into a box and labeled as 'suitable' for anyone.
ReplyDeleteGreat voice, strong without being over-powering yet, has her say.
Like the little bit of background info too :)
Thank you, I thought the background was needed for the f/64 title to be meaningful.
Deleteoh this is wonderful!!! x
ReplyDeleteThanks Kay :o)
DeleteSee me as I am ... awesome!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Helen :o)
DeleteLove this!! "Accept my beautiful scars and creases."
ReplyDeleteThanks Janie!
DeletePowerful...beautiful...
ReplyDeleteThank you Tess. Another great prompt!
DeleteOhhhh! I love this. I lover her, this speaker.
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Oh I do love this...right on, girl
ReplyDeleteHey thanks Rene!
DeleteYes, when you love only love matters, the poem is exquisite.
ReplyDeleteYou have an uncanny knack for seeing to the heart of the matter. I enjoy your work.
ReplyDeleteThank you Rebelle - I appreciate that more than you know.
DeleteYou captured the feeling with the same clarity as Weston caught the image.
ReplyDeleteNothing more than what you are
ReplyDeleteMore should take this to heart near and far
Take the fake
And drown it in a lake
Thank you Pat...we should do that!
DeleteThis IS an Amelia like photo-I have a lovely soft photo of her here at home, my first collected art work!
ReplyDeleteThanks Izzy, I'm glad you saw it too.
DeleteOh, wow, that's beautiful. wonderful job!
ReplyDeleteThank you Hedgi :o)
DeleteI too saw her strength and was drawn to it. Wonderful poem!
ReplyDeleteThanks Dana, I like these images of strong women.
DeleteVery goodv good ones...ok .?
ReplyDeleteThanks Chris. xo
DeleteBeautifully expressed, and she does look like a woman who would say these things.
ReplyDeleteThank you Sue!
DeleteA feminist Charis; well done indeed.
ReplyDeleteThank you Berowne. Of course I have no idea what she was actually like.
ReplyDeleteA woman of substance indeed!
ReplyDeleteThanks Helena :o)
DeleteA perfect capturing of the photo Mary....and an amazing write!!
ReplyDeleteOh thank you Carrie!
DeleteThis as a poem for women everywhere is completely wonderful, but it speaks volumes for Charis herself- and if she were alive to read this, she'd be blushing!
ReplyDeleteThank you Karen - very kind words.
DeleteWonderful poem. I liked your last three lines best.
ReplyDeleteThank you :o)
Deleteaccept my beautiful scars. i quite like that line...oh, so many needs to accept their own beautiful scars. they mark us as survivors.
ReplyDeleteVery true Lime. Thanks.
DeleteWonderfully good- loved the authentic bite of this.
ReplyDeleteThank you Buddah (hmmm...not something I expected to write, lol).
DeleteExcellent words!
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Thanks Anna :o)
DeleteSo beautifully written...romantic yet refreshingly realistic. In 55 words, YOU ROCK GIRL!!!
ReplyDeleteMine is here
Have you a TRULY BLESSED WEEK!!!
hugs
shakira
Thank you Shakira! You have a wonderful week too!
DeleteShe seems so strong, like a singing sword, Artwmis like . Thanks Mary .
ReplyDeleteunretouched. Now that is something to admire... for photography and in relationships. Thanks for adding this piece to the puzzle of Weston & Wilson.
ReplyDeleteYour poem sets a perfect aperture for this image. Well done!
ReplyDeleteThank you very much T :o)
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