One
smooth stone
I hold
in my palm,
yet
it remains
discrete,
separate.
Filled
with potential energy
and
a history I cannot access,
I touch only the cool, outer surface.
Secrets within remain hidden;
giving up nothing.
It simply is.
It simply is.
Silent
and unyielding,
an
inscrutable mystery,
I
hold in my palm
one
smooth stone.
Image: peterbolland.blogspot.com/2010/07/smooth-as-stone.html
This is for G-man's FF55. Check it out for 55 words of wisdom, humor or pure good storytelling. Maybe add your own.
pretty cool rumination...a simple rock is not so simple....i like the potential energy and history....so much contained in this little one....def a very cool piece...
ReplyDeleteHey thanks Brian!
DeleteThanks Brian.
DeleteOh, yeah, smooooth.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteYou have given voice to my very thoughts! I am a rock hound and this struck a beautiful chord in my heart. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteAh, that's great Gail. Thank you.
DeleteOh, this is lovely.
ReplyDeleteI really believe even rock has it's own form of life. It is 'made' of different substances which are made of atoms, particles etc etc and, they hold energy. I love the gentleness of this, the insight, the pondering.
Beautiful. Really so much said in just 55 words.
Oh, thank you for your thoughtful comment Daydreamer. :o)
DeleteI love the feel of different stones in my palm Thanks for the reminder! I have some with holes worn smothly through their small selves, I call them 'ponders'.
ReplyDeleteI like that Izzy! Thanks for reading.
DeleteOh, I don't know... I think you 'scrutted' it pretty well, Mary!
ReplyDeleteI whatted it? Not sure what that means but thanks for reading Eric.
DeleteLove the way this comes full circle--round as the stone, and just as smooth. Excellent 55, Mary.
ReplyDeleteThanks Joy. What a great topic by G-man too! ;-)
DeleteAnd wonder how many other smooth stones I know nothing about.
ReplyDeleteAlice - I'm sorry but I can't find your blog to read and comment in return. Thank you for your comment here though.
DeleteYou rock the rock
ReplyDeleteAnd talk the talk
Can you walk the walk
Follow the chalk
Heheh - Thanks Pat, keeper of the cat.
DeleteWow Mary....
ReplyDeleteThats the kind of deep thinking usually
associated with some REALLY Good Weed!!!
And even if you were straight whilst composing
this thoughtful little Gem, it's still quite
profound.
Loved your ruminating 55.
You Rock Mary Bach, from Kenosha to Peshtigo,
Have a Kick Ass Week-End
Hahaha - I'll have you know I was stone cold sober when writing this! Thanks (I think) G-man.
DeleteI intended on writing something deep and meaningful ... then I read Galen's comment and I can't stop laughing!!
ReplyDeletelol, What a card. Thanks for reading Helen.
DeleteGREAT imagery!!
ReplyDeleteHey, thanks Janie!
DeleteThank you Janie :o)
DeleteI actually have a Petoskey stone I "fondle" every now and again. It is shiny and smooth. :)
ReplyDeleteAh, that's cool Margaret. Sounds like that would be very helpful with relaxation and/or meditation.
DeleteI like the way the last stanza completes the first. I love stones. I collected a little bag full on a Lake Superior beach last weekend. My sister thinks I'm crazy but she lives there and takes it all for granted.
ReplyDeleteThanks Yvonne. I'm a stone fan too (and a Stones fan!)
Delete55 thoughtful words.
ReplyDeleteThank you Dr. FTSE. :o)
DeleteI love this!
ReplyDeleteThanks Mama Z! Sorry I'm a bit slow getting these answered.
ReplyDeleteMary, I love this!
ReplyDeleteThanks Ayala!
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