Painting by Daria Petrilli
When I went
to the doctor about
the growing lump in my abdomen
no one suspected I had an ocean in my womb.
But
that did explain
the leaking and the smell.
My uterus has become a coy (kio) pond;
I am
retaining water.
Of
course
the doctors
recommended
an immediate hysterectomy.
But they were not sure if it should be done
by an OB-GYN, or marine biologist, or ichthyologist,
or some
other –ologist altogether
I
decided
to wait and see.
Meanwhile, I’ve stopped
eating sea food and developed a fondness for kelp.
Also, I’m considering a tattoo – maybe compass
points
on my right thigh.
After all,
I am
Mother of the Oceans,
caring for my realm.
I am
Goddess of the Waters
deserving your devotions
I am
Queen of the Seas
favored of all daughters
and all your marine dreams
reside in
me.
*Amphitrite: In ancient Greek mytholog Amphitrite was
a sea-goddess and wife of Poseidon. Under the influence of the Olympian pantheon, she
became merely the consort of Poseidon, and was further diminished by poets to a
symbolic representation of the sea. -Wikipedia
Wonderful.
ReplyDeletemmm this is wonderful!!
ReplyDeletewhat an imagination you have! Excellent!
ReplyDeleteStrange and wonderful. :-)
ReplyDeleteGonna need to do the operation in a pool haha
ReplyDeleteVivid, extravagant writing. Fine work...
ReplyDeleteWhat a fantastic imagination ~ hope it is not a breech birth . . . :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for this introduction to a great diminished lady-
ReplyDeleteALOHA from Honolulu,
ComfortSpiral
=^..^=
I loved the fantasy and your vivid imagination! ♥
ReplyDeleteA wonderful and funny poem with a delicious Mother of the Seas!
ReplyDeleteClever, humorous, imaginative, & love the way you shaped the stanzas. The second stanza made me smile the hardest; I have several "eulogists" on my medical team these days. You rocked the prompt, creating a flawless response to the image.
ReplyDeleteya know. the fact you call yourself the "other" Mary is intriguing to me. What other Mary should take precedence over these creative works? Ive yet to find that one. haha
ReplyDeleteA lovely portrait of ocean mother:)
ReplyDeletegreat imagination !
ReplyDeleteNot always easy being a goddess, is it? This has great movement and the infinite swish of water in it, Mary--really excellent images you've chosen as well, and love how you get that fluidity into your language to wash your message in this poetic bottle ashore.
ReplyDeleteExcellent! I loved this!
ReplyDeleteWow ! Whered that come from ? The Compass is a brilliant image ... Hope you are well
ReplyDeleteliquid. a new favorite, Mary ~
ReplyDeleteFabulous incorporation between woman and water. You took the prompt to full potential and it paid off wonderfully, Mary!
ReplyDeleteThank you everyone. I appreciate that you took the time to read an comment.
ReplyDeleteThis is outstanding, and so imaginative.
ReplyDeleteI love Greek Mythology and I believe you done a wonderful job of writing about the greatness of Amphitrite. Mother of the Sea to me has great importance considering water is so important. Lovely!
ReplyDeleteClever and humorous...enjoyed...
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