Friday, April 17, 2015

Transforming Skies

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Sun-shot, spun gold clouds
graze the morning sky above 
stratospheric flocks

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Grey-stained spitting sky
crackles with power and life
sending out the winds

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In the Imaginary Garden we have been asked to write haiku for Transforming Fridays with Nature's Wonders.  This is National Haiku Day, so go crazy in 5, 7 and 5 syllables!
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20 comments:

  1. CloudiaApril 17, 2015 at 10:09 PM

    Wow!



    ALOHA from Honolulu,
    ComfortSpiral
    =^..^=

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  2. EllaApril 17, 2015 at 10:29 PM

    Gorgeous! I wanted more~

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  3. Sumana RoyApril 17, 2015 at 10:42 PM

    I second Ella...love how you spun beauty :)

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  4. WanderApril 17, 2015 at 10:51 PM

    Nice verse mary

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  5. grapelingApril 18, 2015 at 12:12 AM

    wind was blowing here, too - but not quite like that ~

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  6. JimApril 18, 2015 at 12:33 AM

    Nice comment on the weather, Mary. I like the sky spitting. I also like the weather picture. I see a pig's head in the lower left and a long John clad little fellow flying in the upper right.
    ..

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  7. Vandana SharmaApril 18, 2015 at 12:58 AM

    enchanting beauty of nature:)

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  8. brudbergApril 18, 2015 at 1:11 AM

    billowing clouds are such beauty. A slight threat in those grey one.

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  9. Susie ClevengerApril 18, 2015 at 1:31 AM

    Yes, wow! I never heard a weather forecast spoken so beautifully.

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  10. Rosemary Nissen-WadeApril 18, 2015 at 3:54 AM

    Striking.

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  11. Gillena CoxApril 18, 2015 at 7:06 AM

    luv the second one for its sound appeal

    thanks for dropping in to read mine

    much love...

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  12. Pat HattApril 18, 2015 at 9:04 AM

    Sure can change on a dime and give us either, much like life

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  13. hedgewitchApril 18, 2015 at 10:05 AM

    You have a real way with these, Mary. I was going to say the first one knocked my socks off, but the second one is just as good. I am hopeless with the haiku.

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  14. Jennifer WagnerApril 18, 2015 at 10:43 AM

    I especially like that first one!

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  15. Magaly GuerreroApril 18, 2015 at 11:07 AM

    Love the sounds of the second haiku. It put me at the center at the sky, and told me why the storm... perfect.

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  16. Kerry O'ConnorApril 18, 2015 at 12:48 PM

    You created a detailed juxtaposition of the clouds.

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  17. OutlawyerApril 18, 2015 at 1:05 PM

    So wonderfully atmospheric and vivid. Thanks. k. (Manicddaily)

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  18. WolfsrosebudApril 18, 2015 at 1:38 PM

    some beautiful lines in this... i can't imagine the world without color... perhaps, it would be filled with texture

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  19. HannahApril 18, 2015 at 10:13 PM

    These are so intense!! I love the way you use grazing and flocks in the first and the consuming gray power of the second...excellent...thank you for adding your voice to the challenge, Mary!

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  20. MargaretApril 20, 2015 at 1:41 PM

    spun and spitting... lovely images of nature.

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