Begin
with flat shadows and deep whispers,
tumble through the mirror
till finally
you reach
the end
then spin around
look at your reflection
scoop up fistfuls of dark fear and
let go
This form is called Mirror Cinquain, which is defined by the following syllable count per line:
2/4/6/8/2-2/8/6/4/2. Please follow this link: Imaginary Garden with Real Toads to check out more poetry for their Open Link Monday. And submit on of your own if it strikes your fancy!
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"Begin
ReplyDeletewith flat shadows and deep whispers,
tumble through the mirror..."
Kind of eerie. Great wording, Mary. I like the "darker" side!!
Hey thanks Ginny!
DeleteOh, Mary, I really like this! Tumble through the mirror--nice imagery. I've never tried the poetic form. I love the structure, so I think I'll give it try. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem.
ReplyDeleteThanks Denise - it's kind of cool, and looks good center aligned too.
DeleteReminds me of a matrix type feel
ReplyDeleteGoing to the other side also sounds like a scary ordeal
Haha - the picture was from the Matrix. I was going to do Alice through the looking glass, but that seemed too obvious. You smart kitty!
DeleteWonderfully above the margins of possibility.
ReplyDelete~Mary
Thanks FM - glad you stopped in!
DeleteLiberating joy!
ReplyDeleteThanks Paige, you got it!
Deletenice..i like that last line s in particular...and the freedom found there..nicely done...
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