There's something about poetry that saves me… ~ Martin Espada
nice...simple image but i find the tendrils of smoke enchanting...
dissipate into nothing...will think of this next time i blow out a candle...nicely done mary
Well yes, this is perfect!
Thank you! I'm going minimalist, as this is kinda' tough for me.
This is great. A metaphor of things put to an end, a struggle and then to nothing. :) Nice write!
Nicely done, Mary!
Ravenblack - thank you!ayala - thanks :o)
Very well done. Simplicity is something I've never mastered.K
Kay - Thank you, I tend to be simple-minded, ;-)
nice...simple image but i find the tendrils of smoke enchanting...
ReplyDeletedissipate into nothing...will think of this next time i blow out a candle...nicely done mary
ReplyDeleteWell yes, this is perfect!
ReplyDeleteThank you! I'm going minimalist, as this is kinda' tough for me.
ReplyDeleteThis is great. A metaphor of things put to an end, a struggle and then to nothing. :) Nice write!
ReplyDeleteNicely done, Mary!
ReplyDeleteRavenblack - thank you!
ReplyDeleteayala - thanks :o)
Very well done. Simplicity is something I've never mastered.
ReplyDeleteK
Kay - Thank you, I tend to be simple-minded, ;-)
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