I dream
and in my dream 
things are cross-wise, wrong…
I scour the sink 
with my toothbrush,
and tiny black bits of dirt 
fall from the bristles.
Everything is off a bit,
like the reflection from the mirror
when the medicine cabinet door
is ajar, just a bit
Then I wake and find you gone.
This will be a poem one day.  For now though it's just 55 words for G-man and his FF55.  Click on the link and check it out!
i hope you don't use that toothbrush again, dream or not lol
ReplyDeleteMary Bach...
ReplyDeleteSometimes you get so morose.
It just shows how creatively versatile you are
Loved your longing 55
Thanks for always coming through with such classic genius
You Rock from The Valley to Hurley, Have a Kick Ass Week-End
ouch. that last line says it all....and in that moment, everything is just a little off...
ReplyDeleteThe face we want to look is gone:(
ReplyDeleteWe get pretty strange after loss.
ReplyDeletei agree with brian.. the last line says it all.
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