Friday, January 20, 2012

Out


Snuff the candle
watch the smoke rise, swirl, waver
and dissipate into nothing

Over at the pub those dVerse Poets are doin' shots of Imagism.  


Image from neatorama.com

9 comments:

  1. nice...simple image but i find the tendrils of smoke enchanting...

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  2. dissipate into nothing...will think of this next time i blow out a candle...nicely done mary

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  3. Thank you! I'm going minimalist, as this is kinda' tough for me.

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  4. This is great. A metaphor of things put to an end, a struggle and then to nothing. :) Nice write!

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  5. Ravenblack - thank you!

    ayala - thanks :o)

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  6. Very well done. Simplicity is something I've never mastered.
    K

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  7. Kay - Thank you, I tend to be simple-minded, ;-)

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